Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
. . .& that's sayin' alot.
First piece in over a year.
The words on my loose leaf are too deep-
For you geeks to accuse me of selling out.
I bet I shout, until fumes leak & consume these-
Who have a shred of doubt that I’m the truth, b.
I drop plumes, deep in the center of your consciousness.
Honest, kids - If another says I fell off, I’ma flip!
The problem is, I go to school and I got a gig.
I’m busy! That’s the reason I ain’t droppin’ shit.
I’m still the nigga who put you all to shame.
Still got more Legend noms than you got Hall of Fame
Still the one growing, while you are all the same.
Stationary bike syndrom is what I call you lames.
New cats here don’t know me, & I had enough, dude.
If you don’t know, I’m the idol of the guy you look up to;
Weak niggas know me for debating in ID;
Real niggas know me for eating faces in 03
Then going on a legendary topical rip in 04 & 05.
Now when I look up, I see no more of the old guys-
Who were dope when I was constantly rippin`.
All I see are the old herbs pretending to be Wicked.
But fuck it, you can have that spot, trust me
Niggas been suckin’ my dick - I had enough, b.
& I guess I’m jaded, when I mention: I hated the attention,
And to reflect to you cats that I didn’t need it,
I changed names & erased my Legend pieces.
This is the reverend speaking - Innovator of sorded tales.
Only spittin' cause I got a few minute & I’m bored as hell
“Chris you’re rusty - Trust me, I’ve seen you do better
Seen you tell dope stories, back then, you used mettas”
Yeah! I know -
I got 100 pieces doper than this. . . I ain’t saying it’s hot
But it’s still better than 100 of our shits. . & that’s saying alot
niggas
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Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
^Lmao, he said his name in the piece. As in, Wicked, but anyway, yea I agree with the bar you wrote with the quotes around it that you expected us to say:
"Chris you’re rusty - Trust me, I’ve seen you do better
Seen you tell dope stories, back then, you used mettas”
Piece was real self-glorification, so yea the flow was good. That's it.
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Originally Posted by Evolve
Alias?
Lmao it's chris fam, but anywho, I tend to gloat alot, but I try not to post it on Rb this inspired me to drop some of my other ish and stop acting self consious, becase this was nice bruh, I mean the meta's were nice and word play was good I liked these lines alot:
Quote:
Still the one growing, while you are all the same.
Stationary bike syndrom is what I call you lames.
New cats here don’t know me, & I had enough, dude.
If you don’t know, I’m the idol of the guy you look up to;
Weak niggas know me for debating in ID;
Real niggas know me for eating faces in 03
Then going on a legendary topical rip in 04 & 05.
Now when I look up, I see no more of the old guys-
You know I've seen you around the boards and ish, but this is a first for me maybe since I've been gone I missed out, but yo I enjoyed reading this piece, yo can you return the favor on my iece's in my sig, because honestly it's hard to get quality feed around here nah mean.
Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
Bro, please drop more often in OM. That's really all I got to say. I'm not about to critique this since it's been a long abscence, just know I got much love and respect for your work. This braggadocio is a much needed lesson for the new heads. The Pantheon/Wit's End. Hah.
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Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
nice piece....ill be honest...im not gonna reply with a long,drawn out reply..im gonna say it simple....ill....rhyme scheme..wordplay...vocab...imagery....ability to gloat...all inall everything about this piece was ill....very nice...keep droppin tha hottness.~1~
Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
Weak niggas know me for debating in ID;
Real niggas know me for eating faces in 03
Then going on a legendary topical rip in 04 & 05.
Now when I look up, I see no more of the old guys-
Who were dope when I was constantly rippin`.
All I see are the old herbs pretending to be Wicked.
hah .. feelin this and i can tell your a battle head.
nice write seems like you wanted to let more disses out then anything.
nice.
Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
Thanks for the replies. Much love, Mindless.
Nique, you're still me wet dream, even though you reject me. :(
Re: Product of Bordem: ". . .& that's sayin' alot."
To be honest, i would like to see more of you writing man, I remember back in the day when you used to be wicked, you were basically running the show... And i know you've stood back from writing a little, as we discussed the other day... But you still got so much potential man, ever want to colab, feel free to ask. Just hit me with a topic and i'll be happy to write with you.
Anyway, check out me and sharps piece. 'romeo's dead'
thanks man.
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flow was dope... and good structure.. you came pretty hard in this..
so this shit definitely grabbed my attention.....
Weak niggas know me for debating in ID;
Real niggas know me for eating faces in 03
Then going on a legendary topical rip in 04 & 05.
Now when I look up, I see no more of the old guys-
Who were dope when I was constantly rippin`.
All I see are the old herbs pretending to be Wicked.
(dopeness)
I got 100 pieces doper than this. . . I ain’t saying it’s hot
But it’s still better than 100 of our shits. . & that’s saying alot
(yeah.. and i was feelin this too)
keep the flows comin.. cuz i plan on seein' more from you shortly...
im sorry i couldnt hit this up sooner.. but it was buried all the way on
page like 5.. lol... im bored... so im just pullin out some old pieces i
havent left any replies on... to give some feed, too..