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The Empty Stage
From baby to momies angel a little stranger
Grew up gracefull mind & thoughts distastefull
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Stagefright with no stage errased her, replaced her
For nobody knew who she was they cussed & swore
More quiet every night confused & abused she was forced
Because of course she was older now & couldn't get a divorce
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So she mourned sipped alchohol 'til the mornin' to forget
The bruises & beatin's she was receivin' like due morgage
Payments & court statements financial issues were engaged
& probably for the rest of her life 'til death off the empty stage
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S'when
Life
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Re: The Empty Stage
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Re: The Empty Stage
This was a pretty bland topic to be honest, it was too short (I actually dont think it meets the minimum amount of lines to be posted) but the rhyme scheme was simple, there was no great usage of vocab, some of it seemed forced towards the end, its obvious that you didnt put much time into it but if you developed the story more or added more to it, it could be better.
hit up Friend?
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Re: The Empty Stage
