I have left, but my memory remains

Whisper to me sweet nothings in my ear
Tell me you love me, and my heart you’ll hold dear
Hold my hand as my eyes are drawn closed
Place on my chest a wood carved black rose
Shut the door, and walk away with your head high
Picture me, with my hero’s up in the sky
Know that nothing ever means the end
Hope and pray that my soul is god send



I have left, but my memory remains
Death taken me, blood not pumping through my veins
I am sorry I have left you this way
I’ll blow you a kiss, an angel will help if find it’s way


I have left, but my memory remains
Death taken me, blood not pumping through my veins
I am sorry I have left you this way
I’ll blow you a kiss, an angel will help if find it’s way



Watching down, as your life flashes by
If attached to my body, my eyes they would cry
You beauty remains transcending through the years
Even in heaven you joining me, relives all my fears
I promised we’d be together for ever and always
I died today, with you standing in the hallway
You swore you’d see me again some time very soon
It’s happened to fast, the world would see gloom



I have left, but my memory remains
Death taken me, blood not pumping through my veins
I am sorry I have left you this way
I’ll blow you a kiss, an angel will help if find it’s way


I have left, but my memory remains
Death taken me, blood not pumping through my veins
I am sorry I have left you this way
I’ll blow you a kiss, an angel will help if find it’s way

Leave links and i'll get to them

I enjoyed this piece...the emotion was clear from the beginning...I loved the suttle approach..and the vocab used...not really trying to overdue it with a lot of big words..makes it seem more realistic to the reader...overall this was a good drop...and I'd like to see more from you...maybe with a different rhyme scheme or more structured syllable count..good drop though...keep it up....and RTF...plz...

bump.

also I enjoyed reading this piece. you have incredible writing skills.... vocab was on point. and it was very emotional. id like to read more from you soon. i dont oftenly post any replies in poetic scriptures...... but it caught my eyes. so ill be sure to check in every couple days to see if you have any new pieces posted. RTF. please bro.

thanks but i would prefer if next time you posted the link to what you want me to leave feed on.

Dam, this was doppe you had meta's for days in this piece, lord knows I'm thankful for you posting this in here, I dont care if you didn't write it lol it's a pleasure to read such well writt piece. The story line on this piece was rather short, but aweing. the imagery was amzaing you litterally desribed everything down to a spec of dust and you didn't over do it.

The emotion was felt from the start to he finish of this piece, I usally don't like lovey dovey type piece's but this is a exception, the language and diction in this piece was rather apealing and I loved your rhyme scheme, it just flowed so niccely with this piece,all in all I still enjoyed reading this piece, I never haad any idea you could write like this, anywho, can you leave feed on my piece.

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