Left Side???Right Side????
Right side of the Brain:::
Im the side wit the 'Ideas'...cuz I've got the 'Artist Gland'...
'Paint' pictures wit my thoughts...then my thoughts 'Depart this Man'...
Creativity???Thats me...I come up wit the 'Fun Stuff'...
til the 'Left Side'...butts in...and says that you 'Done Enuff'...
Fuck that...its my turn.......................and 'Ive just Begun'...
Left side of the Brain:::
Why must he run...off at the 'Mouth so Often'...
how is he bossing...when this Coward runs off and...
Says he's got 'Ideas'...when Im the 'Smart Side'...
Im the one that you 'Turn Too'...outside on a 'Dark Night'...
taught you how to 'Park Right'???told you what to do.................
got you outta trouble......when you hit that 'Park Light'!!!!
Right side of the Brain:::
That dudes just 'Talks Tight'...he dont really 'Know Nuttin'...
believe me trust me when I tell you I 'Know Summin'...
that dudes a 'Pro at Fronting'...when he never 'Backs it Up'...
sure hes got a 'Couple of Thoughts'...but they all 'Wak as Fuck'...
Smack him Up...if I ever could 'Reach Em'....
Left Side of the Brain:::
Be Quiet 'Im Teaching'...letting this kid 'Learn new Stuff'...
cant have him out 'Beating Ass'...hes gotta 'Learn that its too Rough'...
gotta get a 'Job Earn Money'...get his ass 'Back in School'...
dont wanna hear ya 'Thoughts bout That'...thats why we aint 'Asking You'!!!
think about it for 'Just a Second'...could change 'Life in a Flash'....
thats why the 'Left Hand'...grabs a blade...starts 'Knifing that Half'...
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Bob B trying to make his mark ya'll watch good. I like it real creative. Keep ups
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I like the idea, you did a decent job of it
The idea was dope tho, props on creativity
Try to stay away from forced multi'z, some were
stretched just because you wanted to rhyme..
Got off beat and off topic a few times when you did that
Keep the hot ideas comin tho
Holla
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lol yeah that idea was mad original. You did a good job of assigning dialouge and personality to each half of the brain. also the ryhming at the end of the lines was pretty solid throughout. I liked some of the wordplay but a few spots have pretty akward wording. Make sure you don't stray too far from a normal conversational flow, or it will sound unatural.
Props good piece.
