Ill. Org Presents: Sweet Dreams

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=4941894

I started up a lil' group in my city, after showin some people my music.. and i discovered some more talent that matched mine.. at first it was just me and this other cat thats on this track... now i have 7 members and more contemplating... i've got lots of positive feedback from this song in my city, i hope you all will like it the same.. i mixed myself, so the mixdown isnt professional, but it still sounds good. tell me wut u think

first verse- Colombian Warrior
Second Verse- Ta2
Third Verse- Colombian Warrior

leave links and i rtf

http://www.soundclick.com/illicitorganisation <----For more songs look there.. there's only 2 up at the moment but we got more on the way.

LISTENING...NICE SAMPLE INTRO ITS ORIGINAL AND FUNNY....
beat sounds a lil cluttered...presence is nice...i dont speak spanish so idk bout that part....the flow sounds dif not realy my style...the spanish guy gets crazy as the end...the chorus is ok...nice feeling...second verse nice i dig it...the flow is prety simple but not bad...you fit in the track...qualitys good and everything seems pretty nice...if i spoke spanish i may like this more....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=325062
return the favor on one of these tracks

will do homie thanks for tha feed

rise. leave links.

common people.. i got one feed.

yea this was pretty cool, I liked the beat. I swear that group of lesbian schoolgirl singers are called ta2 as well... :P

It was cool to hear, because you dont always hear tracks with emcees spittin diff languages. I think it went together quite well, but your right that it could sound a bit crisper and maybe some more doubling up to re-inforce some sections because the spitting sounds a little thin in places. flow was pretty cool, although I think some change in pitch, tone and speed would have made it more interesting, maybe some bars back to back with the spanish breh, just mix it up a little. overall I did like this, the beat was pretty nice, and all the emcees came cool.

aight thanks for tha feedback and i'll take your advice in2 consideration for our new and upcoming work...