atleast 10 lines
30 minutes or less,
Blind Spit.
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atleast 10 lines
30 minutes or less,
Blind Spit.
If you're my enemy my energy
Your rhymes are elementary get lost in penitentiaries
When I begin this century so mention me
And Imma heat the track up if it's loo of you demons
I suggest you go get back up
Load the mac up don't slack up Imma act up on
Any mutha fucka that think he got his clown suit on get
Stepped on destroy your mind you're wasting your time
Cause when I spit a fucking rhyme I got a million in line
To listen to me, a bitch to do me nick naming me hollow tip with a stand off clip
That'll kill your click and will kill your brain if you can't maintain
Better slow your roll boy money hungry ain't no ho boy
That's for sure boy and ya know boy I'll whip your ass like four boys
You're a decoy I'm the real thang I'm a genius you're a pea brain
Get pissed on and whipped on so who you talkin' shit on Imma spit on
Any negative spirit that step to me try to take my soul
From under me but I got a lifetime warranty..
Damn this dude is the definition of a pedofile,
poor bitch thinks he can rap because he watched 8-Mile,
Keep talking dude you can't beat my Artistic Style.
Don't fuck with me dude your scrooge I'm the Apparition,
I'mma show you how worthless your life is like a Weather Condition,
Maybe you should look up that shit it's call a Dictionary Definition,
This bitch to busy jacking off to me in a fucking Masturbatory Position.
Dude you ain't good at rap your like Vanilla Ice,
Because when it comes to you naked, you have a dick like you white,
Dude If I'm a hoe it's five hundred for the asking price,
Because she likes it big, she ain't a fan of no white rice!
Uppin #1
This battle was really weak both of u have alot to learn about structure and punches..
JB. 2 lines = one bar basic fundamental hip-hop.. U should have a punch at the end of each bar.
Riz half ya shit didn't even rhyme and your punches what little their were didn't make alot of since this is a battle u haft to diss ur oppenent dont talk about urself so much just concentrate on the disses.
V/ JB
Both yall hit da battle up unda my sig.
this battle was week i hated it!!
j....i think u should stay away from ure self apraising lines and go for punches
and rize wtf!!! i ddnt even understand what the fuck u were talkin about i couldent ficd a single punch maby they were there but i ddnt notice them........well
V.rize just for this line cuz it was sorta a punch ....i guese
You're a decoy I'm the real thang I'm a genius you're a pea brain
Alright, appreciate the vote ReZet.
Uppin #2
vsQuote:
Originally Posted by J. Butler
no flow
J not so many dudes r u wyte?
anyway hit me up
Vote DQed...wack
-Smoka
Yes, which I gladly say to people. Not to many white rappers can flow, which is why I am really trying hard to disprove this theory.
Uppin #3
aight ma vote goes out ta J.Butler his was better althought some advice for ya... try and put a punch in with every bar... listen ta some biggi and think like that or maybe eminem... he uses lots of punches. this was weak but ur was definatly better
rize... kid up with the punches ur shit was pure wak... i mean it was empty... devoid of any decent diss... anway good try and props ta ya both