Hello Im...Piztol!

Hi My Name Is Piztol, Im A Mutha Fuckin Menace
Wit Murder Death Kill All In My Muthafuckin Lyrics
I Spit That Ignorant Shit Puttin Real Rappers Out Of Business
I Wont The Hoods To Feel This
I Wont The Kids To Hear This
So I Can Cop Bling And Put More Killin’z N My Lyrics
I’m Just Tryna Sell Dope And Smoke On All The Marijuana
Fuck The Baddest Bitches And Diss My Baby Mama
Im Jus Tryna Fuck The Groupies, N Have Em All Cocked
Rap About My Diamonds - Buy The Whole Bentley Lot
I Got A Million Ways To Tell The People That Im Hot
And Ima Tell Em That Im Ballin’ Even If Im Really Not
Cause I Could Turn My 4 Door Into A Big G4
And Turn These Couple 20's Into Millions...Galore
Im Just Tryna Turn My Fights Into A Bunch Of Vicious Killinz
N Turn My Weed Sacks Into Some Gangsta Dope Dealinz
Ima Call Women Bitches And Say Fuck They Feelinz
N I Gotta Smith & Wesson Bringin’ Death To Civilians
Hey! My Name Is Petey And I Could Really Give A Fuck
About Lyricism - Shit Im Rappin’ For The Bucks
Im Just Tryna Chrome The Truck
And I Don’t Really Give A Fuck
About Who’s Not Respectin’ Me - Cause I Lack Depth But See
It Really Doesn’t Matter Cause Ya Girl Wants To Sex With Me
Your Writing Deep Lyrics While We’re In My Bed ‘Wrestling’
So Gon Ahead And Hate Me But Ima Brain Wash The Youth
And Get Rich Off Shitty Lyrics Like All These Other Rappers Do!

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Decent man, but I ain't gonna get around it, it needs better sting and better rhymes, though I like the balls of it, so i'mma give ya 6/10

It was ok. Wording could be better, I liked it though you had the right concept.

thx on the feed...appreciate it... [*sidenote* the simplicity and words i used was kinda on purpose to add to the concept]

Yeah but being a new member, you getta get some good rhymes in atleast, I mean(as much as I hate using white rappers as an example) Look at Eminem, he makes himself sound like a little lazy bitch, he still raps like a professional whether people like it or not. Just something to think over.

LoL. I hope I'm right when you're rapping as a first person character to satirize the rap industry and how bad rappers get paid for bad lyrics. It was kind of clever in that way, I don't think people are quite getting that... And maybe you dumbed it down even to help that out... ANyways, I want to see something more from you, a more serious topic about yourself or a different topic from your perspective that is a little more concentrated on flow, this had it's moments but a lot of times was choppy. Still, made me kind of laugh at the rap game again.

thx man ..