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due midnight
this my check n goodluck
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(300 to vote)
10 lines
due midnight
this my check n goodluck
iight well i'ma dropp now cuz i gota bounce..u better drop
i only spit the truth, and this bitch b stickin in olden day telephones,
cuz she known by havin holes are all 'spread' out like mini put zones
this tomboy think she a G, so for sure she aint followin the laws,
as for friends..
.......b at a high of 0 pms like shes already hit the men'o'pause,
you'll never b a rapper, ..and i'm juss showin you in a 'key' way,
cause ya she probly balls<-since she always wanted sum for her b -day
i was gonna son u but ya wanna b neesed... whatever you wish*
N my hood got ur back so leave. n dont 4get ur wheelchair bitch,
ha i'm done hoe. its the truth^ and dont blow job for votes now,
cuz everyone kno...that ur red lips'stick to dicks like ya name l'oreal*
*nieced
*a lipstick company
if u dont drop by midnight i'm gettin this dq'd cuz u accepted the battle
iight...
b got a reason to spazz, he another whore about to be smashed
'n yet he wants me to pull out... & leave a larger hole in his ass
you get credit for callin out a bitch? lol nigga TRY to impress me
'coz i'll admit, your writing is unique... only IF your a fuckin lefty
so kid, don't tempt me coz NESSE could care less if you creepin
'n i'm the worst host, so b_my_guest... & serve ya own beating
i mean, you need a reality check, if you think this shit is funny
but i wont batter & bruise ya drive... it already crashed dummy
haha...release your anger...laugh, cry, throw a fuckin' tantrum
'n if your mind wanders off a lot... i'll shoot & use it durin campin
B my guest
i only spit the truth, and this bitch b stickin in olden day telephones,
cuz she known by havin holes are all 'spread' out like mini put zones
meh
this tomboy think she a G, so for sure she aint followin the laws,
as for friends..
.......b at a high of 0 pms like shes already hit the men'o'pause,
ok
you'll never b a rapper, ..and i'm juss showin you in a 'key' way,
cause ya she probly balls<-since she always wanted sum for her b -day
played against her
i was gonna son u but ya wanna b neesed... whatever you wish*
N my hood got ur back so leave. n dont 4get ur wheelchair bitch,
meh
ha i'm done hoe. its the truth^ and dont blow job for votes now,
cuz everyone kno...that ur red lips'stick to dicks like ya name l'oreal*
naw
Nesse
b got a reason to spazz, he another whore about to be smashed
'n yet he wants me to pull out... & leave a larger hole in his ass
ok
you get credit for callin out a bitch? lol nigga TRY to impress me
'coz i'll admit, your writing is unique... only IF your a fuckin lefty
lol
so kid, don't tempt me coz NESSE could care less if you creepin
'n i'm the worst host, so b_my_guest... & serve ya own beating
nice
i mean, you need a reality check, if you think this shit is funny
but i wont batter & bruise ya drive... it already crashed dummy
lol
haha...release your anger...laugh, cry, throw a fuckin' tantrum
'n if your mind wanders off a lot... i'll shoot & use it durin campin
ehh
v/B.Nesse.....reasons above
b.nesse had this one cauze of the better flow and the clever metas. it went down like this:
nesse
b got a reason to spazz, he another whore about to be smashed
'n yet he wants me to pull out... & leave a larger hole in his ass
LOL
'n yet he wants me to pull out... & leave a larger hole in his ass
you get credit for callin out a bitch? lol nigga TRY to impress me
OK
so kid, don't tempt me coz NESSE could care less if you creepin
'n i'm the worst host, so b_my_guest... & serve ya own beating
NICE
i mean, you need a reality check, if you think this shit is funny
but i wont batter & bruise ya drive... it already crashed dummy
haha...release your anger...laugh, cry, throw a fuckin' tantrum
'n if your mind wanders off a lot... i'll shoot & use it durin campin
I get it perfectly
vs
you'll never b a rapper, ..and i'm juss showin you in a 'key' way,
cause ya she probly balls<-since she always wanted sum for her b -day
ha i'm done hoe. its the truth^ and dont blow job for votes now,
cuz everyone kno...that ur red lips'stick to dicks like ya name l'oreal
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322991
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=323016
Hit Whichever, Both Slept On ^
you get credit for callin out a bitch? lol nigga TRY to impress me
'coz i'll admit, your writing is unique... only IF your a fuckin lefty
so kid, don't tempt me coz NESSE could care less if you creepin
'n i'm the worst host, so b_my_guest... & serve ya own beating
i mean, you need a reality check, if you think this shit is funny
but i wont batter & bruise ya drive... it already crashed dummy
Vs.
this tomboy think she a G, so for sure she aint followin the laws,
as for friends..
.......b at a high of 0 pms like shes already hit the men'o'pause,
V// Nesse.
uppin 1
yo imma have to go with b.nesse in this battle...most of b_my_guest shit was alreay played such as the gay jokes..etc, b.nesse you had the fresher topics and harsher punches so imma have to go with you..
v/b.nesse
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898
uppin 2
hmm wonder y he's on but wont uppin this lol
this tomboy think she a G, so for sure she aint followin the laws,
as for friends..
.......b at a high of 0 pms like shes already hit the men'o'pause
vs.
b got a reason to spazz, he another whore about to be smashed
'n yet he wants me to pull out... & leave a larger hole in his ass
you get credit for callin out a bitch? lol nigga TRY to impress me
'coz i'll admit, your writing is unique... only IF your a fuckin lefty
so kid, don't tempt me coz NESSE could care less if you creepin
'n i'm the worst host, so b_my_guest... & serve ya own beating
B My Guest...you really lacked a lot of wit and humor in your punches...really ruined the point of most of them with wording also. The one line I quoted from you was good, but again lacked in wording. You need to work on wording and punching harder and direct. Also...shorten your lines and use normal font dunce!
Nesse....girl this was alright. Quite one sided as you easily made him look rediculous. But I liked the sturcture and the wording for the most part was good...then your last four lines came and I was unimpressed. Nice work though nonetheless. Work on wording also, but you're not bad there. Try to be consistently strong throughout your verses...you don't want to end weak, unless your opponent sucks, which in this case it was true.
v/Nesse, much better.