SirusX vs. Ink Edible

10 lines...Drop soonish...

House rules...Good luck

just saw this.

good luck.

with the punchlines youve been missing, ur still needed round these bluffs
but if u think we lean on you, ur trippin so hard i wanna get ur dealers stuff
im the realest reason why you'll never know success, n im not even top of this
i still have little confidence cuz bein better than u aint really an accomplishment
i love it, s'why i cant get enough of it, similar 2 losses an your rec.
n with all the ghost writers you know, we can call those^ colosses text
its all fun an games, 'least thats how i'll describe my competitive composition
back seat mack speach..
..path finder math rhymer but when u derive theres always turns ur missin
ur dumb ass wont rasie a hand with flow, an u could never raise the octive
an we all kno ink is posionous once digested, s'why ur text flows are so toxic
:spank:

Thanks for my first win...

I hope you got a Gillette for Christmas, this emcee isn't hot
'Cause this pussy is full of wacks...Whether it's bikini season or not
This is proof post count means nothing, you're not even fresh
This battle's a perfect TEST for me...I'll have no problems with X
^That graded paper punchline is money, now empty your text
Everyone knows your style won't cramp...Your lines get plenty of stretch
It's not like you have any to flex...Your wack raps through
You couldn't catch an Ohh! from Steve-, 'Cause you're a Jackass...Too
So you'll be at the edge of your seat excited all in the brink
They say don't bite your pens...But Sirus' Ex was swallowin' Ink

Don't get the lines...Don't vote...

Uppin'... 1

both verses where fuckin good i like the line from sirus's verse im the realest reason why you'll never know success, n im not even top of this
i still have little confidence cuz bein better than u aint really an accomplishment

an the one from ink'sIt's not like you have any to flex...Your wack raps through
You couldn't catch an Ohh! from Steve-, 'Cause you're a Jackass...Too

those r my 2 fav bars from the both of u tough battle too decide so imma have too judge on mmmmmm sirus he beat chu wit the toxic bar good battle

nice drop.

1-0.

Nice drop both.
X- im the realest reason why you'll never know success, n im not even top of this
i still have little confidence cuz bein better than u aint really an accomplishment
All i saw out of you. You threw a lot of fillers and self glory lines in there. Take out the self glory and add some punches n ur gunna climb quick.

Ink-I hope you got a Gillette for Christmas, this emcee isn't hot
'Cause this pussy is full of wacks...Whether it's bikini season or not
Nice wordplay. ok punch
^That graded paper punchline is money, now empty your text
Everyone knows your style won't cramp...Your lines get plenty of stretch
nice punch. I liked the way its worded.
Thats all I see from you.
You hard more punches and clearly dropped harder.
v/ink

im the realest reason why you'll never know success, n im not even top of this
i still have little confidence cuz bein better than u aint really an accomplishment
i love it, s'why i cant get enough of it, similar 2 losses an your rec.
n with all the ghost writers you know, we can call those^ colosses text
Ok

Vs.

^That graded paper punchline is money, now empty your text
Everyone knows your style won't cramp...Your lines get plenty of stretch
It's not like you have any to flex...Your wack raps through
You couldn't catch an Ohh! from Steve-, 'Cause you're a Jackass...Too
First one was Good..Other one was ok 2

Very close battle..Ink Edible, i expected alot from u..And overall you had a decent verse. You have some nice wording, and ok punches.

Sirus X-Good verse. I liked your wording. Good punches..Overall good verse..You took this battle by a little bit. Good verse..
V// Sirus Ex'

2-1.
\\ up //

Up...

this was a decent battle....good verses on both sides, but I think Sirius Had a little more creativity and complexity....Ink the beginning of your verse didn't really cut it for me, it all rhymed terribly and didn't quite work..though good attempt and you had some good lines don't get me wrong..but I think sirius took this one

v//sirius

good battle.
i seen some tight shit poppin off in here but my vote goes to Sirus in this battle.. the punches were decent from both but i felt that SirusX came with more creative-ness towards his punches with more interesting bars in his verse as well.
Ink,
you came with some okay disses and teh flow was all okay or what not but your disses/punches weren't all too strong at all just lightway original punches but atleast the shit wasnt bad you just need to elevate ya skills


v/sirus

aiight yo this was a dope battle, but imma have to go with serious cuz his verse was more wittier and original..also his punches were more direct and harder hitting..no hate to ink cuz ur verse was pretty dope just you need to elevate and throw harsher punches aimed at your opponent...
v/serious
both hit this and ill poll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322898

im the realest reason why you'll never know success, n im not even top of this
i still have little confidence cuz bein better than u aint really an accomplishment
i love it, s'why i cant get enough of it, similar 2 losses an your rec.
n with all the ghost writers you know, we can call those^ colosses text



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