Blood Blots & Ink Clots

Blood Blots & Ink Clots


Kept to my calling... just a fall guy stalling
a respected death to resurrect the wrong song;
Hip Hop went all city and we sung along with pity,
simply disillusioned to four element's fusion.
Confusion contorts your cohorts in their short-
sided statistical revert to seeing the game as sport.
It's the only suicide revised to hurt anything
but the industry, crying tears over criteria seen
like we've been watching green screen routines,
then added in an average addictive beat when fiends
of lyricism resorted to supporting street teams.

Beneath blood and ink reason needs to think
which mixture to seal; clean the bleeding link.
Missing is this thing we'd steal, bottled in drink
twisting caps backwards sitting at 16 bars kinked;
got faucet flows on tap that are all outta sink.

Should I connect the dotted lines where you'll find
a dollar sign in fine print right under the bottom line,
or refund you're time for listening to the crime?
A stale taste; that pale complacent face... do you mime?
My minds been gold-mined so I stole cold, refined souls,
to combine a platinum shine to the everyday grind;
binded in a contract but I'm content with the concept
of declining abstract rehashed as mass appeal overslept.
Made a deal to intercept tape deck intellect; dirty digits
diggin for who did it, didn't Diddy budget high fringe bets?
Got a Jones's to die on me; next jump off your Diary... Bridget.

.. two links to have this reopened.

- Atty

this was a really nice piece..the flow seemed clean like a smooth rapper typa shit ya kow...it was smooth and really a nice touch of complexity and vocabulary ya know it was on point and it was real..you hit your thoughts well on this and got it started from start to finish. i was just really flowing with this and it was just a nice mix of emotion and content. nice job man sorry its short but im on a time limit

PZ.
hit this up pls.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=320895

Cool, Mindless. Usual no-attention to structure, I say that in no way as a critique, I think it's cool that you write your pieces the way you want them read, continuously, because that's the only way to get your flow, anyway. It was very cool man, the flow was really nonstop and it made for a fluid read that I had no trouble keeping up the entire time. It's not like this piece made some kind of earth-shattering statement, or had a lot of emotion to latch onto, but for me, it was very cool and singable. So, as usual, a nice job, look forward to you in SS.