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Verses are due by Friday midnight pacific..
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Voting ends Sunday midnight....
Championship Point Rules: Win by KO 10pts., regular win 5pts., win by no show 3pts. and your opponent that no shows has a clean wipe of their points completely.
Good Luck....and drop dope
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hah, check
Check.
just kno u bitches get a free belt... *envy's beating you both :love:
phillip's right.. we done got marked kid, but your 'skill' stirs a harsh myth
coz me and him are a close match, while you got burnt to start with
i'll give you hell bitch ..why? because i'm rude, n' you aint felt shit
but we know YOUR a stand up guy, and the women just can't help it
being dope? for you thats hard too, but ya play a good part, dude
this belt is undisputed ..but when it comes to your shit we could argue
look at this wyte lie ..a clear daylight flaw, yet i don't give a fuck
and you may be at your last straw, but you know you'll always suck
you normally win the races, yet your a missplaced faggot too kid
but when we race it to the ground ..you just know i'll beat you to it
your future couldn't look more drear ..i see what this whore fears
and don't take lady liberty's job, but you should torch your career
fuck you queer, here my name is best, faggot i'm threw bluffing
but wyte is the perfect name too, since you really amount to nothing
you mod on a site called rapfuture, but it's a failing piece of work
n' i see how a shit writer can run a forum, with a LL league thats worse
You don’t get girls ..just that ugly hoe your datin’ ..damn its insane
Cuz bitch you couldn’t move weight if you put your mom on a crane
I don’t know where im headin’ ..shits crazy ..but some shit just hit me
So ill follow the map on your face ..N’ all the pimples are big cities
Cry can’t even keep it real ..he fake ..this mu’fucka aint no hustler
Shit Cry’s life’s a bigger lie ..then the shit that u see on Myth Busters
If Cry ever sees a victory ..he’s in the desert ..lookin’ at a damn mirage
Cuz we can all tell that Cry’s driveway doesn’t quite reach the garage
That means your retarded kid ..easy ..N’ ..this nigga needs to pay me
Cuz I’d make Cry look like a bitch ..but well he wears make up daily
Fuck the bull shit sonz ..imma make this even worse ..cuz you cant win
But ill give Cry a great big hand ..followed by a uppercut to the chin
This is all too easy ..I really don’t even have time for this ..end ur life
Im makin’ this a Freestyle <----- N’ urs wouldn’t even go at that price
That barely rhymed ..yeah I know ..its all good though ..you’re a myth
Cuz I just thought for once ..I would stoop down to your level bitch
V/me... just better
Cry
phillip's right.. we done got marked kid, but your 'skill' stirs a harsh myth
coz me and him are a close match, while you got burnt to start with
match lines are played, descent punch tho
i'll give you hell bitch ..why? because i'm rude, n' you aint felt shit
but we know YOUR a stand up guy, and the women just can't help it
no really filling this
being dope? for you thats hard too, but ya play a good part, dude
this belt is undisputed ..but when it comes to your shit we could argue
Dope Punch, nice flow and good hit, nice wordplay flip
look at this wyte lie ..a clear daylight flaw, yet i don't give a fuck
and you may be at your last straw, but you know you'll always suck
Good punch, nice wordplay
you normally win the races, yet your a missplaced faggot too kid
but when we race it to the ground ..you just know i'll beat you to it
flow a bit choppy, wordplay good, nice creative punch, well connected
your future couldn't look more drear ..i see what this whore fears
and don't take lady liberty's job, but you should torch your career
Dope punch, great wordplay
fuck you queer, here my name is best, faggot i'm threw bluffing
but wyte is the perfect name too, since you really amount to nothing
Not feeling this at all
you mod on a site called rapfuture, but it's a failing piece of work
n' i see how a shit writer can run a forum, with a LL league thats worse
Strong personalized finisher
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Whyte
You don’t get girls ..just that ugly hoe your datin’ ..damn its insane
Cuz bitch you couldn’t move weight if you put your mom on a crane
Not a good opener, weight flips are played
I don’t know where im headin’ ..shits crazy ..but some shit just hit me
So ill follow the map on your face ..N’ all the pimples are big cities
Good punch, creative, nicely worded
Cry can’t even keep it real ..he fake ..this mu’fucka aint no hustler
Shit Cry’s life’s a bigger lie ..then the shit that u see on Myth Busters
Well, this was an okay punch. I thought the creativity was good
If Cry ever sees a victory ..he’s in the desert ..lookin’ at a damn mirage
Cuz we can all tell that Cry’s driveway doesn’t quite reach the garage
this was descent, felt u could has substituted something to make it hit harder
That means your retarded kid ..easy ..N’ ..this nigga needs to pay me
Cuz I’d make Cry look like a bitch ..but well he wears make up daily
Hell no, wak
Fuck the bull shit sonz ..imma make this even worse ..cuz you cant win
But ill give Cry a great big hand ..followed by a uppercut to the chin
Good solid punch
This is all too easy ..I really don’t even have time for this ..end ur life
Im makin’ this a Freestyle <----- N’ urs wouldn’t even go at that price
Dope punch, great wordplay flip
That barely rhymed ..yeah I know ..its all good though ..you’re a myth
Cuz I just thought for once ..I would stoop down to your level bitch
Wak closer
Very close battle,.. I felt Cry had a slight edge in this battle in punches and that was what this battle came down too. Who had the better punches...
Vote - Cry
Cry -
phillip's right.. we done got marked kid, but your 'skill' stirs a harsh myth
coz me and him are a close match, while you got burnt to start with
kinda played, reworded..its better, Ok.
i'll give you hell bitch ..why? because i'm rude, n' you aint felt shit
but we know YOUR a stand up guy, and the women just can't help it
Meh.
being dope? for you thats hard too, but ya play a good part, dude
this belt is undisputed ..but when it comes to your shit we could argue
Nice punch, good wording.
look at this wyte lie ..a clear daylight flaw, yet i don't give a fuck
and you may be at your last straw, but you know you'll always suck
Nice..
you normally win the races, yet your a missplaced faggot too kid
but when we race it to the ground ..you just know i'll beat you to it
Nice rewording, good landing.
your future couldn't look more drear ..i see what this whore fears
and don't take lady liberty's job, but you should torch your career
Dope punch.
fuck you queer, here my name is best, faggot i'm threw bluffing
but wyte is the perfect name too, since you really amount to nothing
Shoulda worded it better, would hit harder.
you mod on a site called rapfuture, but it's a failing piece of work
n' i see how a shit writer can run a forum, with a LL league thats worse
Dope Finish.
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Wyte -
You don’t get girls ..just that ugly hoe your datin’ ..damn its insane
Cuz bitch you couldn’t move weight if you put your mom on a crane
Nah man, this punch is played. Needed wording more.
I don’t know where im headin’ ..shits crazy ..but some shit just hit me
So ill follow the map on your face ..N’ all the pimples are big cities
Creative punch, nice wording.
Cry can’t even keep it real ..he fake ..this mu’fucka aint no hustler
Shit Cry’s life’s a bigger lie ..then the shit that u see on Myth Busters
Meh punch, could been better.
If Cry ever sees a victory ..he’s in the desert ..lookin’ at a damn mirage
Cuz we can all tell that Cry’s driveway doesn’t quite reach the garage
Eh, this was not very great, need better wording, once again.
That means your retarded kid ..easy ..N’ ..this nigga needs to pay me
Cuz I’d make Cry look like a bitch ..but well he wears make up daily
No.
Fuck the bull shit sonz ..imma make this even worse ..cuz you cant win
But ill give Cry a great big hand ..followed by a uppercut to the chin
Nice
This is all too easy ..I really don’t even have time for this ..end ur life
Im makin’ this a Freestyle <----- N’ urs wouldn’t even go at that price
Nice.
That barely rhymed ..yeah I know ..its all good though ..you’re a myth
Cuz I just thought for once ..I would stoop down to your level bitch
No
Very Very Close Battle, The wording in this battle should have, and could have been better, Cry, you had a nice solid verse, nice punches, but the wording in your punches shuld have been thought about a little harder, Wyte, you had a nice solid verse also, wording was bad in the begining, but in the end your out come was great, your closer should have been better but you still had it..
Vote - Wyte
Cry
phillip's right.. we done got marked kid, but your 'skill' stirs a harsh myth
coz me and him are a close match, while you got burnt to start with
[average, good setup but fizzles a little after]
i'll give you hell bitch ..why? because i'm rude, n' you aint felt shit
but we know YOUR a stand up guy, and the women just can't help it
[heh- ok]
being dope? for you thats hard too, but ya play a good part, dude
this belt is undisputed ..but when it comes to your shit we could argue
[ok-needed to reread]
look at this wyte lie ..a clear daylight flaw, yet i don't give a fuck
and you may be at your last straw, but you know you'll always suck
[wasnt feeling the setup but still ok]
you normally win the races, yet your a missplaced faggot too kid
but when we race it to the ground ..you just know i'll beat you to it
[race what to the ground? this was a clever attempt with the races/misplaced but it just didnt work for me]
your future couldn't look more drear ..i see what this whore fears
and don't take lady liberty's job, but you should torch your career
[heh alright]
fuck you queer, here my name is best, faggot i'm threw bluffing
but wyte is the perfect name too, since you really amount to nothing
[worst bar]
you mod on a site called rapfuture, but it's a failing piece of work
n' i see how a shit writer can run a forum, with a LL league thats worse
[ok finish]
Wyte
You don’t get girls ..just that ugly hoe your datin’ ..damn its insane
Cuz bitch you couldn’t move weight if you put your mom on a crane
[nah...]
I don’t know where im headin’ ..shits crazy ..but some shit just hit me
So ill follow the map on your face ..N’ all the pimples are big cities
[stretched but ok]
Cry can’t even keep it real ..he fake ..this mu’fucka aint no hustler
Shit Cry’s life’s a bigger lie ..then the shit that u see on Myth Busters
[not hard hitting- maybe with a different setup]
If Cry ever sees a victory ..he’s in the desert ..lookin’ at a damn mirage
Cuz we can all tell that Cry’s driveway doesn’t quite reach the garage
[uh...great start but not really feeling the driveway metaphor]
That means your retarded kid ..easy ..N’ ..this nigga needs to pay me
Cuz I’d make Cry look like a bitch ..but well he wears make up daily
[bleh]
Fuck the bull shit sonz ..imma make this even worse ..cuz you cant win
But ill give Cry a great big hand ..followed by a uppercut to the chin
[ok-relatively common concept]
This is all too easy ..I really don’t even have time for this ..end ur life
Im makin’ this a Freestyle <----- N’ urs wouldn’t even go at that price
[probably ur best bar- pretty decent]
That barely rhymed ..yeah I know ..its all good though ..you’re a myth
Cuz I just thought for once ..I would stoop down to your level bitch
[weak closer]
v/ Cry
honestly volume ..read your fucking vote. either you're riding or you've got the name wrong. not swaying, but he made it obvious by saying all wyte's punches were lame/wack besides 3 and FIVE of mine were nice and dope? makes no sense. fuck outt'a here.
2-1 ..need votes
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