because im crazy

excuse me miss
but what has this come to
your sister told me to fuck off
but i didnt know that was a fuck me from you too


dumb bitch



a man sits alone, feelin nothing
payed 80 dollars for 3 grams of loving
he hates it, but still relies on it to get by
doesnt have to shit to look foward too
so he gets skeezed and high

packs a loose cigarette, cant eat but he's hungry
hold its up to not lose its contents
sparks it and feels numby
loves me loves me not
all that he thinks
appearing to be mad at her
but inside he winks
grabs a drink, its a sweet tea
he taste none of it
but it tells him you still payed 2 dollars for me

opens the door, falls comfortably into his seat
put the key to ignition, and takes the peddles to his feet
a right on laird, a left on thomas drive
its 630 and his drop off time was 5

the fiends are pissed, and always taking shit
i weigh him up a half gram less
because he called my bitch a bitch
using a ziplock freezer
to make it look fatter
why they always question my shit
i could of been a dick and sold them arm and hammer

now happy, he began their night
asked him to blow a line
so snorted some more white
a car pulls up, its a scion xb
a girl steps out
turns around and smiles at me
she's short not too short but big with in the eyes
shes about 5 foot 5 with a nice breast and thighs
thought it was lie, she had dreds of locks with her hair
an amazing stare, she walks over here
i guess to compromise with my fares

walks so slowly, sways in the street light
ask me what im gettin into
where im gonna be tonight
i tell her to get in, to snort some sin
she touches her chin, opens the door
and excitingly falls in
smells of lavender, not lavender but lavender haze
flips on the head lights
and trips with amaze


hello, my names katie
its real nice to see you
my friend told me to come chill
and that id probably like to meet you

thinking so much, but nothing to say
i spark a swisher of kz
i look towards her
people call me haze, but my names mat g
i pass the rilo and precide to my striving
i can feel my heart in my feet
and my feet in my driving

i take a left back on laird
a right on laurie
another left on 98
pulling into my drive way
with no need to hurry
i get out, feeling polite
so i open her door
she stands up next to me
trying so hard not to be foward
just another december night
she grabs for my hand
i look her in the eye, shake it
im not a bitch im a man

out of her purse she pulls a half gallon of crown
say here im taking care of you tonight
im gonna turn that frown upside down
its weak its corny
but why not
i have no where to be
and she's pretty fucking hot
30 minutes later my buddies arrive
she's kinda faded
sitting in my lap
starring in my eyes
i lean foward i kiss her
she looks suprised
i lean foward and kiss her again
and my soul dies

ayo u drop sick in every1 one ur O.Ms bro... good shit.. this peice was deep.. nd was mad realistic ... u had nice flow and creativity... overall good drop.. keep it up

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=321703
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=321729

upp

This shit was actually quite entertating, you buse great array of vocabulary. You had a substantial flow to go along with your witty wordplay. Noi punchlines I don't think, well I didn't see any. The topic was really great, propz on that. And yeah, it did had alot of realism to it, i wouldn't be surprised if this really happens. 8.5/10, keep droppin`.

it was just another day
my shit doesnt change to much
thanks for the feed

upp

This was a lot more down-to-earth than a lot of the scripts on here are so it was quite easy to understand which is good. The quality was dope and I liked the structure you had here, rythm went smoothly.
Story was interesting, I liked how I could select your feelings from this.
Last time completed it well. A death is a good way to end a rhyme since dying is the end (in my view :angelsmil )
Nice piece, keep it up

upp

yeah this was pretty nice i reckon. quite simplistic but crafted well all the same in its simplicity.and kept me lightly entertaned and reading til the end f'sho. a couple of minor grammar errors here and there but seemed to straighten up as it went along.the flow was mostly fluent so props on that tio,,,,,,,,,,
yeah all in s'good shit

check out me and Baron's collab

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=322465

This was alright, not really anything special, but still a decent read. you told a dope stroy, in a laid back kinda way, without too much big words and shit. You managed to get your message across, and came with a peice that is moderately enjoyable, there were some minor faults in your wording and your flow in places. But all in all this was an alright read. Props.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...28#post5414528
^rtf please

it wazent da best i've read