Dizzy Vs Kawtic (come Watch A Severe Beating)

Check in lets get this goin.
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severe beatin?
lol aight man watever this time i will give ya a good battle now

Thiz iz a idiom I’m spitting to a idiot’|
I slap thiz silly snitch- like a mom breast
feeding a silly bitch”|

|Personalz| & |Punches|

Yo momz is –ill- she give knowledge as
best as she still cainz’| (can)
Why you stupid mayne’ cause yo momz
give ill brainz’| (lol)
Get mad @ me, you don’t have to have
mercy esay’|
Even still, when I murder you, I promize I
wont leave nada’|
I will dap-fizt-wit niggaz behind you’|
Blind you’|
Flowz so -deep- not even Satan can find
you’|

I ripped out all ya muscular
structurez…so bring bout 2 hurses’|
Why am I still spitting I laid diz kat out
first 2 verses’|

Oh and –Paylezz- started issuing
rapperz’ to display lezz’|
Nigga kawtic is sufficient’…dizzy still
lay-lezz’|

Oh and be real Kid’ you know I aint
pretending’|
My Damn “lima’ can’t rap but he still spit
a rip better than yo ending’|

Oh and Juzt to Let you know…

Thiz kid is getting shot’ like Tupac did in
the Chest’|
I put yo soul to rest, when the glock
surpress’|
Nigga I’ flex shit’|
No wonder yo mind speakz like its
anerex-it|
When the Tek-Hit’ I’m bringin the Hectic’|
dizzy flowz is empty’|
How he think he coming with the Correct
hit’|


Holl@ Back’

dizzy iz a bitch, damn well he can’t
split-it’
Wit real ~Nuts in hiz mouth~
that’z the only time he Spit-Shit’
Get on the track and get a new
profession’
No session thiz battled haz been ranked
in Kawtic's possesion’

Ayo......

Slippin off tha edge of insanity, because of my punches are hitting him so rapidly//1
Unhappily swallowin my structure slowly as pain forms, every inch that it lowers you feel an intense struggle to breathe and your head warms//2
Causing a hand of death in tha texture of shadowy smoke, as i'll choke tha fist will perform a hoax to make sure everyone of your bones are broke//3
Punches and content got you sweatin and brutally beatin, just like tha topic said, now you have to perform an act of cheatin//4
Have your few respects dangling on a wire by a dick ride, even if they were your bitches they'll still come and pick my side//5
Imagery thoughts giving you a reason to think of suicide, your a waste of time and this win wont be an addition to my pride//6
You disgust me with your basic rhyming technique and little vocabulary, people are gonna start callin this tha battle against a dictionary adversary//7
Original undefined theory of your profound weary at haste, as you BITE your lip you get a taste of COPY and PASTE//8
I knocked tha stupidity right outta of tha white race with no hesitation, frustrated with your dumbness i decide to bomb on you now R.I.P. to tha rest of tha nation//9
No one knew tha effect, of not earning respect, at tha first sign of neglect, now your blowing in tha wind like ashes because you didnt have tha time to reflect//10

i think that straight
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um okay start votin in da battle

Read over the verses and you'll finf dat kawtic got ripped.....Dizzy's verse had some nice punches and was overall hott......kawtics verse looks like he was forbidden to write a long bar............ur bars are shorter than ya dick........haha jk........GoNe

um...this battle was pretty weak on all counts.
kawtic: very confusing writing style. little to no flow, punches were forced and multis were non-existent. not a very good battle verse

Dizzy: flow was better than his...but your bars run on a lil too long. punches were weak, no wordplay and lil to no multis. not to mention that stupid line about the "white race." i dunno if you thought dissing the white race would have any effect on this battle, but it didn't. besides the fact that it made your verse weaker for coming outta left field with that...lol

so...on the strength of flow and structure (and nothing else)

VOTE: Dizzy

weak battle fellas. step ya game up y'all

this was a weak ass battle for real... both m.c.'s need alot of work on battling.... but my vote has to go to Dizzy cause he sucked less.... even though his lines dragged on, he still had better punches.... kawtic, some of your shit didnt rhyme or make sense

anyway,

Vote: Dizzy

I hate peoples opinions lol. watever i still got tha ko.
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