SS: Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

Simon Says: Cleanse the Psalms

Simon my idol, what is it you preach?
Each to his own, flames burn & reach
A correctional convention, depreciation
So I’ll buy perfumed balms to………………
………………..cleanse the psalms

I knocked on house number 23….
There lived a Shepard………….

He cleansed my soles, burning embers & coals
Stole a few minutes reciting the Kingdoms goals
Boils on the whore, spoils from wars…………
Plus the oiled foils, neighing silently in moulds
I listen intently with intention walking in pain
I fear Satan accursed, my mind bursts & stains
The Shepard drowning against will, fenced bills
Fenced heads on spikes, a river of bloody ills
Stilts of shame covered in quilts of gained kills
And there I stand in the valley of death alone
a dead Shepard navigating a practitioner home

Simon the disciple, what is it you preach?
All for 1 & 1 for all bring death to the leech
a community sharing communion.....
Communication by radios made of plutonium
So I’ll share the perfumed balms....................
............................To jointly cleanse the psalms

I knocked on house number 91....
There lived the protected............

He held me afar, gleaming eyes in fair par
Judging my grey shell, bloody eyes & scar
Recoiled in spite, uncoiled his might.........
Let loose a toiled fight, my spoiled delight
I fall knee weak a martyr, stumped stature
Protector speaks he shouts me a fracture
Mirages vanish & I hang dead from a tree
Resurrected to witness a dissolving history
He’s Devolving with a revolver of misery
Mercy! Mercy Jehovah, reeking of leprosy
And there stood the lord, with him water came
He unravelled my mind & doused the flame

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I then knocked on a Gnostic’s house.......
And there lived the Cyrene family..........

Simon of Cyrene, what did you say?
Carrying Jesus’ cross that awful day
you were nailed, blood further entailed
Hailed in mockery, the whips sailed
And you said, “Lord, why have you
Forsaken me?” You bruised blue & red
so I’ll buy the pen & sell the balms......
..........Re-write your due upon psalms

If Simon of Cyrene had been impaled
On the cross, then had Jesus’ prayers been
Answered in the Gethsemane Gardens?

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Blat Blat my Gat.

This was a pretty interesting drop. I think I voted for you in SS too. I liked it.. it had a kind of poetic & deep feel to it. The flow was nice. I liked that you used alot of descriptive words & really got the imagery going. Well done.

Yup, thanks man.

Bumpy Knuckles.

Bumpy Knuckles.

This was very creative, I gave this a look in SS but didn't bother lol, but i regret that, this peice was a very good read, it flowed nicely through out the whole drop, the way you opened the drop caught my eye and made me want to finish the read, and the place for the pic was very creative and fit in perfectly, nice peice, hit the sig.

Damn P.- you do it every time...Amazing drop...the flow of it was great....your discripitive wording really brought the imagery to life..as I could envision it in my mind...just your word choice and placement alone carried the piece to impeckable boundries..I read this in S.S. but didn't have the time to read your challenger's drop so I didn't vote..but this was a very well written and descripitive piece...I love'd how you went about incorporating the bible into it...really made me think....overall this was just another good drop from you baron...

u seem more tha poetic type kinda pathetic i f i might...say
u must be gay right...lol.......back to church.boy

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Originally Posted by HU$LER

u seem more tha poetic type kinda pathetic i f i might...say
u must be gay right...lol.......back to church.boy

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What should have i out there...i have done many many pieces ranging from new kid Gangksta to necrophilia to religious to rants...plus i don't go to church i'm a muslim...i believe in being aware about all religions though and to be fair...you are a "pathetic" analyser.

Bumpy Knuckles...favours will be returned by end of the week.

Mirages vanish & I hang dead from a tree
Resurrected to witness a dissolving history
He’s Devolving with a revolver of misery
Mercy! Mercy Jehovah, reeking of leprosy

^^amazing...this piece was not what i would consider an open mic piece..pretty much at all, which might be the reason youve had a tough time getting responses, but none the less it was spectacular...alot..alot..alot of description..word choice was phenomanal, the vocab was just exceptional..great job..