Like Father, like son: Devil Insanity

My Own Insanity
Flames scar my arms, like an animal in a burning farm
Demons play with me, like a dog; wishing me no harm
The pain brings out constant screams, this isnt a dream
Merciful laughs, they've forgotten I'm a humen bean
Holding the hand of Satan, he smiles at my pain
Driving me insane only for his own im-mortal veins
He rapes my soul, destroying my own role in life
Lifes getting old, but he wants me to survive
He reaches his hand again, handing his hand to me
Only to re-drive me back into my own insanity

The Reasoning Behind
Twenty Four hours before, I took a gun to my son
He wouldnt shut up, I wouldnt give him a place to run
He said he was sorry, but this will never become his story
It's my insanity, crying out to behold my damned glory
Reaping the fool's sleeping, slaughtering my own child
Creeping upon the dreaming, vertile momentum gone wild
As I pull the trigger, his eyes get bigger till he dies
He get's a change in figure, left with the reasoning behind

Satan Wont Save Me
As my son lays there dead, I remember what he said
"Insanity wont save you, it'll keep you on being lead"
To death in future times, fucking the lawful crimes
Spending dimes on whores that cant do it right this time
I loved him, he wanted to be just like me; I hoped not
What a sin, to let my spawn die with out a stop in thought
But no more, will I let this Demon of demons rape me
Because now I know, that Satan wont save me

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Flames scar my arms, like an animal in a burning farm
Demons play with me, like a dog; wishing me no harm
The pain brings out constant screams, this isnt a dream
Merciful laughs, they've forgotten I'm a humen bean
Holding the hand of Satan, he smiles at my pain
Driving me insane only for his own im-mortal veins
He rapes my soul, destroying my own role in life
Lifes getting old, but he wants me to survive
He reaches his hand again, handing his hand to me
Only to re-drive me back into my own insanity

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Bananas, you kept me reading after that first verse . I felt the pain in that one .


Reasoning behind, i didn't understand made me think you are really on some other shit putting a gun to your son, naw not feel'n it .

The whole drop was nice, keep up that type madness but you know they want give you no play in the commercial world

The Reasoning Behind was the reason I went to hell. Just so you know. And I dont care about Commercial stuff, I'm underground only.

ok drop.....u had emotion and u took it to the point where u had detail to what was goin on....structure was fine nothin really was bad wit that....umm only thing i think was a lil bit meh was vocab...but like i say wit other peeps sometimes u just dont need very big vocab to get a point across but it helps.....but all and all good job...stay up peace

-Quest.

Thanks.