quick freestyle.. i tried a new flow

I brought true game to you people, what's more to say
Wantin to be signed from the Westcoast like Doc. Dre//

I put full time effort and I'm fully commited
Hand over the mic Yea it's perfect like a hat, WELL~FITTED//

I'm like lil wayne but its YouNgWuN on the mic
Ma career going straight to glory, like The New Jersey Turnpike//

You can't stop my flow is goin 'Gently Down The Stream'
If I wana be greedy then I'm greedy, but people still want me on They Team//

I keep things orginized in my career like an accordian folder
Can't lift me up while I'm planted I'm as hard as a bolder//

So stop hatin people, yall sum straight up haterz
All yall who wana be me, keep wishin yall sum weak immitators!!//

sumthin i put 2gether on a dip.. not ma best jus messin wit diss freestyle... don't b hatin.. ~1~ hit me up wit sum feed

gotta have links

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yeah dat waz nice YW

Didn't like it much first of all the topic is played as whoa and you never bought anything new to it you feel me also, i didn't like the visual structure it could have been much better and i doubt you spent quality time on this. I reckon you should broaden your vocabulary and concepts and think of using metaphors and other types of imagery, overall this was aight.