UnTouchable Source

Im not To be Toyed with//
You can't avoid this//
Ill Stranle U Wit This Mic Thats Cordless//
Im a Fortress//

An Untouchable source//
Followed By a Line of Dead Corpes//
Endorsed by You Families Remource//

For anybody trying to hold back//
A maniac pumped wit crack//
You really think I won't React?//
Fuck That//

What Makes you think you can handle a cannibal rapper//
Filled wit More Drugs then A HollyWood actor//

Im the Factor Missin//
The Addition Of shit you Wishin Didn't Happen//
The only thing is I ain't Actin//
Im Reactin To everything U said back when I started Rappin//

Hey I got the Equation//
Me plus a Label Its Amazin//
Mixed wit A lil Purple Hazin in the Basement//

Im Faced wit Trials n Tribulaitions//
What Kind of Weed Im Lacin//
Is the only problem Im facin//
Cuz To Me Ur Forgien Like Asains//

Can't Bring Me problems we don't Spea the SaMe language//
So you Can't Hang With This Enguish//
That Im Bringin You//
Your A bitch I fingered You//



Thats all For now

yo i actualy thought this was decent till the end when you fucked up and got stupid. But hey you had some nice bits and pieces. for an herb that was aight so just keep working on it and try to break free from the mold that your stuck in. Oh and dont rap about what you dont have yet like a lable
prove me wrong id love it

-The muse
BD

uppin

ummmmmmmmm

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WACK AS FUCK!

AHHHHHH another wack nigga from jerzee i'm almost ashamed to be from jerzee now......wack bitch dont ever type any lyrics again

go watch TRL and stick to writting those kinda songs u watch on it

wack bitch

I'm a cross dresser. I'm RuPaul's bitch. You might remember me from such movies as Queer Latifah or Princess Bitch... I just needed to let you know, I like cock... Have a BEEFY day


Peace.....
1.............

damm dawg... what happened here...
This was pretty basic true... you should work on them skills if this as good as u get... fuck what other cats say, just keep spittin' till u get better.... try to make more sense bout what u talking about, ugrade that vocab, and do something bout that flow, it's bit off...
Peace

This wasn't that bad, I agree with Muse. You came off ill then slacked at the end and became "stupid" with what you wrote. Keep elevating and improving your flow, vocab and consistency.

pz

u started off hard then you fell off....ill choke you with this mic thats cordless i liked that...but it wasnt steady...practice