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just fire
i got original flow, the haters trying to stop my show,
thats the reason im gone
stack my doe im loading my 4.
while im chilling on the 4,
bout to let my 44 blow,
shout out to my niggas lock down
cusin charles and uncle joe
i did 2 years took it on the chin
cause i was bucking at the twin
i dont really rap know i
dont really scrap i just let my gat go clap
im to little fight but damn my height
im grp my toast and leave you niggas
out of sight. from s.p yall niggas no where i be.
24 i dont play
fuck u i dear you to come around my way.
i dont fuck wit yall cause
yall gay. my grass green while yall fucking wit hay
my sqaud cons wit yay... while yall talk thru the wire
like kanye.
im sick of these beefs
so i take to the street
unloading my heat
i pop off real slugs while yall internet thugs
yall get stepped on like bugs
yall niggas get kremated
thats dust swept under the rug
its kinda like quick sand how i leave you under the mud.
you fuckin plug all around philly i gets buzz
and the ladies show me love
so do the pheins cause i show them bud
or crack yall rhymes is wack.
im moving packs while the only ones you
carry is the one on your back.
im like t-mac cause the ones on my back
nigga wanna box but im straped
clat- clat- clat
its a rap
from the bling of my mac
i'll take your beans wit my mac
i run my city
cause i roll wit my twins just like diddy
holla (#1 rated all day) get it back pack
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once again where ur links
and pick a diffrent strucure and read other peoples for you drop with Om's Looking this way just looking out 4 u
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well i thought it was hard to follow really, with all the rhymin and the structure was fucked...it was basic, but yea there's a lot of room to improve
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yeah man this piece is meh...
it's a little too "gangsta" for me...all the shit is "ima thug, ima gangsta" and you prolly none of that...but thats besides the point
flow= wack
structure = needs improvement
meta's = non existant
rhymes = well...they rhymed...thats all i can say
4/10 keep elevating
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if you view fucking write
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closed
shit feedback given
