You asked me to battle .....so i call you out..
10 lines
house rules
due midnight
blah ..
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You asked me to battle .....so i call you out..
10 lines
house rules
due midnight
blah ..
who won the first one
AH
BANG
check check one fifty
ha you...but you still wanted a round 2..
check, chump.
Talk about writers block, kid should be blocked from writin
Cuz he dont ghostwrite, 3 concepts he jus keep recitin
keep bitin, keep fightin, keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?
its proof that sound proof doesnt actually stop rackets
we could stash you lyrical ability into a ketchup packet
your a junior writer, homie you aint gifted yet
likes his balls on a T...n he still aint hittin yet
blah...mine sucks...straight real talk
Round number 2, cousin theres no relation to last time
like the police ill put a stop to ya.............................
.................................make sure this ya last rhyme
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Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst
But god wont save ya from this merk,you goin down with ease
son got this battle on his head, kinda like the NY yankiees (hat)
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease
.
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Ima merk you like Airees, man ya gross wit thos bars
throw a hook and leave ya like ya sig.....................
.................................................. red and seein stars
Mehh... Okay, lets get some votes pleaseee.......................................... .................................................. ................
Talk about writers block, kid should be blocked from writin
Cuz he dont ghostwrite, 3 concepts he jus keep recitin
nah
keep bitin, keep fightin, keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check
wtf
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?
ok lol
its proof that sound proof doesnt actually stop rackets
we could stash you lyrical ability into a ketchup packet
meh
your a junior writer, homie you aint gifted yet
likes his balls on a T...n he still aint hittin yet
weak
vs.
Round number 2, cousin theres no relation to last time
like the police ill put a stop to ya.............................
.................................make sure this ya last rhyme
ok
Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst
lol
But god wont save ya from this merk,you goin down with ease
son got this battle on his head, kinda like the NY yankiees (hat)
decent
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease
nah
Ima merk you like Airees, man ya gross wit thos bars
throw a hook and leave ya like ya sig.....................
.................................................. red and seein stars
ook
Meh this was a pretty weak battle here. I feel that both could have came a lot harder in their verses. But in my opinion LG barely edged the win over B with a little harder punches. Both could use some elevation, read LLL battles and shit.
V. LG Barely
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Talk about writers block, kid should be blocked from writin
Cuz he dont ghostwrite, 3 concepts he jus keep recitin<---meh
keep bitin, keep fightin, keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check<---nah
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?<---str8 diss
its proof that sound proof doesnt actually stop rackets
we could stash you lyrical ability into a ketchup packet<---not bad
your a junior writer, homie you aint gifted yet
likes his balls on a T...n he still aint hittin yet<---nah
vs
Round number 2, cousin theres no relation to last time
like the police ill put a stop to ya.............................
.................................make sure this ya last rhyme <---nah
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Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst<---lol, not bad....
But god wont save ya from this merk,you goin down with ease
son got this battle on his head, kinda like the NY yankiees (hat)<---iight
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease<---so-so
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Ima merk you like Airees, man ya gross wit thos bars
throw a hook and leave ya like ya sig.....................
.................................................. red and seein stars<---iight
overall...
breeze - the 3rd bar wasnt a bad diss and the 4th was pretty iight too,
but i wasnt really feelin the rest as much. it was a lil too filler-ish, no hate homie.
LG - your 2nd bar was real str8, and the 3rd bar as well as your closer
wasnt bad either. you had a few better lines and more quality material
here.
i think LG got this, but sorry, i cant vote fellaz.
both a yall plz hit somethin in the siggy plz
Talk about writers block, kid should be blocked from writin
Cuz he dont ghostwrite, 3 concepts he jus keep recitin
ok
keep bitin, keep fighting keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check
nah
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?
pretty good
its proof that sound proof doesnt actually stop rackets
we could stash you lyrical ability into a ketchup packet
ok
your a junior writer, homie you aint gifted yet
likes his balls on a T...n he still aint hittin yet
weak ending lines
VS
Round number 2, cousin theres no relation to last time
like the police ill put a stop to ya.............................
.................................make sure this ya last rhyme
ok
Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst
different
But god wont save ya from this merk,you goin down with ease
son got this battle on his head, kinda like the NY yankiees (hat)
good
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease
good
Ima merk you like Airees, man ya gross wit thos bars
throw a hook and leave ya like ya sig.....................
.................................................. red and seein stars
i like that one alot
liked both verse alot but i think LG took round two
Lg's ending lines were real good i thaught and punches hit hard then breez
V//LG
Thanks for the feed and stuff.... we'll hit you guys up.... Uppinnnnn
keep bitin, keep fightin, keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check
first line, ok, the rest of the verse = wack
vs
hardest punch in this battle, still need to be elevated.
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease
V/LG for havin the hardest punch, and better verse overall.
This battle sucks guys, no hate, just feedback, i've seen much better from Gifted!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post5222660
^^HIT THAT UP HONESTLY PLEASE
Talk about writers block, kid should be blocked from writin
Cuz he dont ghostwrite, 3 concepts he jus keep recitin
meh
keep bitin, keep fightin, keep losin, another L on the rec
kid, to get some votes, ya gotta get ya name-a-check
nah
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?
lol but meh
its proof that sound proof doesnt actually stop rackets
we could stash you lyrical ability into a ketchup packet
wtf
your a junior writer, homie you aint gifted yet
likes his balls on a T...n he still aint hittin yet
meh
weak verse. weak concepts. u need to elevate read LLL battles fam
vs
Round number 2, cousin theres no relation to last time
like the police ill put a stop to ya.............................
.................................make sure this ya last rhyme
nah
.
.
Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst
lol
But god wont save ya from this merk,you goin down with ease
son got this battle on his head, kinda like the NY yankiees (hat)
MEH
that chick crampin ya style, she dont belong wit b_reez
tell her how you cop ya votes,u quick to be a dick tease
weak
.
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Ima merk you like Airees, man ya gross wit thos bars
throw a hook and leave ya like ya sig.....................
.................................................. red and seein stars
meh
weak verse also. read LLL battles also
V//LG barely. weak battle tho
Put you away, you did a bad crime,dropin that verse
Lines more streched than a jumbo pack of starburtst
vs
leave LG flippin, jus like the phone he produce
somethin with good sound! ever hear this kid in a booth?
weak battle
LG-mehish verse, 1 decent bar, the rest was wack, hit up the cyphers and work on your wording and your concepts
breez-weak verse also, 1 so-so bar and the rest was weak, you need to work on the same things LG does
vote-LG
hit this up honestly