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Murder by Meter
I move on these feetless feet through this street-less street
Guts keep seeping such spit-less spit on this beat-less beat
So take some heedless heed as I plant this seedless seed
Now read these deedless deeds yield to its needless need
Or topple like treeless trees assassinated for feeless fees
Still the ceaseless cease as I loosen the creaseless crease
With shiftless shifts swiftness hits harshly on shitless shits
Falling into pitiless pits peacefully destroying all witless wits
Witness the sword-less sword swinging with wordless words
Disturbing your nerveless nerves igniting like herbless herbs
Lings wheezing breathless breath suggests of fleshless flesh
Completing fretless frets fast asleep in deep deathless deaths
Caught-up in knotless knots blood-clots form blotless blots
Counting costless costs ear chops like Goth in fogless fogs
Spewing aghast gutless guts crush & ruin your nut-less nuts
Abusing with cutlass cuts combo kicking your but-less buts
Using bootless boots jolts remove jagged toothless tooth’s
Reduce your useless use & truth-less truth to rootless roots
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this was another nice drop...i love reading your oms...you had really nice flow all through out....the multies were just dope as fuck...strutre was nice and easy to read...pretty creative with how did this...i was feelin the emotion..imagerny was pretty nice...all together nice drop...caught my eye for sure...keep up...and look for my new om..
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Nice. Good imagery and multi's above all.
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this was a decent drop..nice flow..good imagery and the mutlies were good as well...those mettas were decent and the vocabwas too...this was overall a decemt drop//keep it up
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errm you tried to do something a bit more original in this, i appreciate that
but overall it didnt really say anything to me as a reader
it rhymed cool, but had no content
good to see someone doing a verse thats not in the usual form thou
can't say much more on it really
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=314183
drop us a reply if u got 5
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lol.it had cointent...it was based on Samurai and Ninja on the battlefield.but the content is stained within metaphor and multie effcets
killer
