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Blood In...Blood Out
Blood in….Blood Out
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Matthew 26:28 “for this is My blood of the covenant,
which is poured out for many for forgiveness of sins.”
Blood pored to seal the pores created by defected spores
Infected ores cherished by scores; blemished and toured
Animals gored with a reddish dye; the bloody eye stored
Visions of a servant falling; impaled calling; nailed talking
Gargoyles gawking then laughing, disciples softly squawking
Gladiator stalling watching the whipping, betting & hawking
“He’d die in a while!” Israelites smile a soliloquy of lies & guile
Olive flesh coloured red by bile arms move in a military style
Pouring red river call it Nile the sun strikes an hour on the dial
“What...Still alive?” 5 men watch the dark humour and laugh
The King with a lepers tumour covered by a bloody scarf
From the evening to night hanged in plight whipped & carved
Empty stomach aptly starved; skies thundered & tore in mourn
He died there…suffering servant silently hanging till dawn
"They said in boast, "We killed Jesus the son of Mary,
the messenger of Allah," but they killed him not nor crucified him,
but Allah raised him up unto Himself."-Surah 4/157-158
Blood in……Drip Drip Drip…
….Quench your thirst with his blood
…You cannibals……
David’s believers turn tack to attack liabilities they’d rather lack
Gullible men tracked and stacked on shelves hung from their back
Snuck into corners they bleed out mature liquid their skins insipid
Was war a necessity, talks too timid or is it blasphemous swarms
UN was the peace before the storms, dorms turn to military norms
Candid classes of bookworm writers scrub their glasses to see stashes
Mass population represents slaughter of masses, a modern genocide
Brown chequers apartheid brown chocolates belied brown men be spied
See the white light it’s a white guide; black shadows cover colours; hide
Another man died it’s war and war is war where everything is fair
Dare you to go ahead & decapitate that mare; attract News centrals stare
Sprinkle specks of blood to sign the cheque it’s blood money I bet
Excised out my hands and left me an image a fashion statement
Entailment of rancid melodies to brash out the hacked ailment
Existence as scientologists grows in charts & rows; reflexes of throws
That measure your distance of your throw, throw those words of belief
I’m your Religion, your God…hacked, decapitated & sliced at my knees
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Blood out……Drip Drip Drip…
….Quench your thirst with his blood
…You cannibals……
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*Same Feed As Before*
*Goes To Nominate*
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my damn this is the shit, nice vocabulary, nice structure, good topic, amd qoute form matthew, i really love your imagery it was seriously great, this was one of the best pieces i have read in months, i really liked the whole thing i led the lines below you are a seriouslly great topic writet thanks for posting this i feel enlightned
See the white light it’s a white guide; black shadows cover colours; hide
Another man died it’s war and war is war where everything is fair
Dare you to go ahead & decapitate that mare; attract News centrals stare
please drop you thoughts on my link below thanks
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pak you came really good...with some nice rhyming....and almost perfect flow...it was strutred nice and easy to read...the pics got some more intrest in your drop..you have the nice sense of vocab...with the right words in the right spot...this was almost perfect....really amazing drop right here...hit an om in the sig if you got some time...
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Yup thanks, linkages benn checked.
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Ok Pak you have writtin a lot better than this,but this was stilla very good piece.I just felt as if you could have adeed more into this piece.More emotion and creativity.I though your descriptive writing was very impressive, as it always is.I think the people in Splash have a point about the pictires too.Let the words create the pictures.Ok sometimes you need them but don't use them as much.Good drop bro
-Dyl
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i know about the pics thing lol..thanks.
