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10 lines
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Watch out for the onslaught.................a better verse you shoul've bought
You fake and you been caught....cause you only good in your own Thoughts
You caught snake eyes in this game of craps.............delivery is wack
This nigga can't freestyle.........he's screwed off the top like a beer cap
Open his head with a twist...........you good?.........I aint convinced
Only catches punches when he spits...he tried to french kiss my clenched fist
Flow with me?......at what cost......might as well accept the loss
Nigga's more false than blue eyed actors playin' Jesus on the cross
Take your carreer back 10 yard for a penelty....and if you try forgettin' me
I'ma chop off ya head and run it around the block to jog ya memory
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Quit droppin’ toy bars, I slaughter and kill coz u aint smart
N youll be thinkin’ im against the French…the way I destroy art
Rippin ya heart…you think we homies but ill leave this boy dead
Coz the only time you my sidekick is when you receive one in the head
And u don’t take much to finish, not durable and still tippin’
Coz this kids built to last <--- and forever stay in that position
Just listen, your not hard bro your weak as fuck so watch as I run shit
Coz you be lookin’ so soft that you die when butterflies into your stomach
Im half assin you kid, you just a bitch and I whore best
And well see who the bigger man is when I titan my grip on your neck
Rippin ya heart…you think we homies but ill leave this boy dead
Coz the only time you my sidekick is when you receive one in the head
And u don’t take much to finish, not durable and still tippin’
Coz this kids built to last <--- and forever stay in that position
Vs
Nothing
lmfao @ omega red :/ well anyways thought took this with an overall stronger verse his wording and concepts were alot more witty than reds and his wording was better, red read some LLL
V.Thoughts
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who is omega red? up
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Rippin ya heart…you think we homies but ill leave this boy dead
Coz the only time you my sidekick is when you receive one in the head
And u don’t take much to finish, not durable and still tippin’
Coz this kids built to last <--- and forever stay in that position
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nothing worth shit.
ART work on hitting him hard and DIRECT MAN!...get more creative...
V/ thoughts for consistancy!..and punching
Vote - Thoughts
Kinda what i expected here. Artillery, never seen you before i dont think... but i've definitly seen worser. Try and be more direct with ur punches and less played. Thoughts... Ur punches connected way harder and verse was just better overall. No hate.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310650
Honest vote^^
Pz..
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Nice Battle !
Thoughts had the more witty and clever punches and better delievry than artillery. His structure was better and consistant.
Artillery you had a nice group of pounches yet some were played and seemed to be fillers. The indirectness of the punches is what made you lose this vote...Nice Try though Keep at it fam elevation is the key
V = Thoughts
Thoughts, go poll in my battle..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=310650
Rippin ya heart…you think we homies but ill leave this boy dead
Coz the only time you my sidekick is when you receive one in the head
And u don’t take much to finish, not durable and still tippin’
Coz this kids built to last <--- and forever stay in that position
lol ok
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Nothing really :/
v/Thoughts
He had a way better verse imo. Better concept's and punche's that where more direct. Anyway artillary read some LLL battle's and maybe practice in the cypher to get the concept of your punche's. Meh one sided battle.