Grass Roots Tour

Open the anarchist cookbook, stew up a recipe for havoc
Drum and bass mixed with hip hop seems to be gettin me static
but fuck it i blend it, recommend it, defend it to the end kid
A new movement has descended and upended the dimwits
So line up your snares, and slap the hat so intricate
mothafuckas still cant get with this synchopated kick
And even if they could the mission is still hopeless
Where's ya samples, your synths and where the fuck's ya vocalist
Competition less than decent, i'm the best kept secret
Reminisce diamond d = capital STATUS better peep it
Deep shit, the thesis; its come to this
Frequent traveller miles on some mushroom trips
Ignore BillBoard, I'm trying to tour and do some live shit
Sell some cd's on the side, some weed with fans ignited
Gimme gas money, a quarter sack, allow me to afford that
But even if i didnt i'd still come thru with more tracks

Links:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=309499
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=309503

up.

hmm...pretty nice comin from a text head....though i must say this wasnt great...flow was alright pretty plain...vocab was good...words werent to simple...rhyming was alright...kinda flaw at the multies...i like to see alot of multies...strutre was pretty bad and sloppy...but you kept ot short so i didnt mind...you should use a font or something to get the readers more turned on to your drop...the topic was alright dont see it done often but you didnt make it as dope as it couldve been...normal drop...keep up homie.

yeah flow was held tite like as-if u put a lotta effort into it......... wording was fluent........ so as the vocab was was crafted nicely........
when u got time hit this up. i sort of like the way u flipped the concept. which otherwise basic was made to be complex way u put it together...... illy internal rhyme deliveries..... that's the shit i like right there... when ish drops on point it's banging.....
yeah was dealt w/ dopely. a tad short maybe. but then if something's good it may appear short coz a nugga want it to go on sum mo'ha


ended a bit basic and incomplete. seemed to lose the complexity.....

nicely dealt with. .


n dj i gotta say fuck a format. or structure as u put it. a textual structure doesnt make a verse flow. unless you set out to write a shape poem or text piece. then i go flow over structure

pz1





hit this link when u got time-
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=309859

Eh.

Pretty good flow and cap on things. An average piece, with a summoning title, which I think. The rhyming in some parts was awkward, like trying to rhyme 'intricate' with 'synchopated kick', even though you tried a rather complex approach. Descriptive at most, but still a good piece, nevertheless. Good and very realistic, in counting man. Nice one.

good flow... had a nice rhyme scheme... not much for content... but it was a nice little peice... worked with some decent words and got your little message across... i thought you had some cool ideas in hrere and incorperated it nicely into ryme.... good work here.... keep at at it man.

check the ruler