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The 7 Sins: Lust
The Seven Sins: Lust
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Ta2 Tears as Lionel Lust, Verse 2
Pakaveli as narrator, verses 1 & 3
“Look over there”
Sumptuous fruits that grow on greener pastures
Attract attention to riveting eyes that enthral
Moulded from marble perfected by plasters
Amidst the hall one man forgets his phone call
Voluptuous figure plus the full lips a perfect solder
Hold her because beauty is in the eyes of the beholder
“Eh, Lionel you okay”
"Personality is my heroin, whereas her looks are my needle,
Emitting the encroaching addiction to conquer my feeble
Will power. I wish to devour her whole, let me empower your soul
I will teach you to love me, all I desire is an hour of stolen control.
I'm a coward I know, as I extol you in showers to replenish the love and,
Grow, oh my flower grow! I want you. I need you. You're cherished beloved.
My sanity perished forever, and you are the convicted murderer.
Stole me of my heart with but one glance, a modern day burglar.
I’m confessing, it's depressing, you’re all I think of, a mental possession
I'm suggesting my passion and... All you do is call it my obsession."
The Natural Painting
Lionel finished the charcoal of her hair
Now it was time for the red of her lips
But no red colour was present there
So Lionel gets a sharp knife and nips
His vein bleeds the red, the natural paint
Dies from the colours that mixed to taint
His blood is mixed with acid he dies slow
But oh the beautiful lips, they sure do glow
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RIP Sir Lionel Lust
He Who Forgot to Buy Red Paint
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Feed This!!! and Paka, feed my collab with Educated.. thankyou.. and i love this piece we wrote!.
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Checked ya colab Ta2......now uppin'^^^
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this was a really nice drop....i dont think i seen anything totaly wrong with it...flow was nice from both you ta had some off lines but not many pak kept up thru his whole verse....strong multies from both of you...very creaivte and nice to the 7 sins series which seems like jus something for pak to collab on...and so far they all have been dope as fuck...the layout and strutre was amazing how you both made it fit like pak did the whole thing lol...good drop keep up pak...hit my newest drops please...the weekend and Drama.
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Thanks, i'll get to it sonner than later no doubt.
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lol yes the seven sins r dope
but Lust is the dopest.. cuz im in this.
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This was a nice read, this seven sins series thing that you are doing, is really working.....this was a captivating read, I didn't want to take my eyes off it for a second, which is unusual for me seeing as I have a terrible attention span lol. Both verses were good, I'm not going to say who I thought came better, because both were just as goos as each other, both verses fitted in well with each other, and the peice was really enjoyable and easy to read. Keep at it, props.
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Thanks for the comments, they're appreciated.
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Pak I'll edit this with feed if you can feed on my OM called Speaking Slience
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i will prolly tommorwo...i'm off for the day.
