Knock, knock

Knock, knock
Who`s there?
It`s an overweight, underachiever
With broken dreams
Tryin` to get a hold of somethin`
A cross breed
Half black and half white
That makes me a whole of nothin`
A nappy haired, gangster walkin`
Part time in crowd member
With crooked teeth
That could hold back millions
With my words alone
But, if looks could speak
I`d be the quietest person here
Standin` in the corner, by myself
Like, fuck the life of the party
I can get high myself
While I, down these beers
To, drown these tears
Hopin`, to catch your eye
Cause I hate the long road home
I was hopin`, to catch a ride
By you perhaps
But, you`re too busy taklin` to them
Every girl here has fucked that dude
But, you`re still talkin` to him
Cause he`s that guy and I`m that guy
But, we`re nothin` alike
Seems that he`s every girls dream
And I`m just nothin` to like
But, I`m a nice guy really
If only you would get to know me
Tryna get up the nerve to approach you
Guess I`m gettin` there, slowly
Maybe just a little too slow
Cause I haven`t even said hi
Haven`t introduced myself yet
Feels like, you`re already sayin` bye
All I`m askin` for is one chance
And I`d come runnin` anyday
Knock, knock
Who`s there?
It doesn`t matter
You won`t open the door anyway
But I`ll still keep knockin`

Cam`s drop
Bounce`s drop

Show no love. Love will get you killed. But fuck it. It`s the i-net. So reply fuckers!

lmao nah getting slept on


Nah/Mentill you nailed the topic with a sledge-hammer
i got the mindset and character like it was myself, i've been that dude at that party
great take
simply put but very expressive and you captured a persona
nice

vote-mentill


lmao at copy pasting replies from one rapboard to another

this was dope... i felt it flowed well through most of the peice but neer the end you seemed to slow it down a bit which i didint like cause it threw off the movement of the peice... but other than that the descrition here qwas great... you created a character that anyone can imagine... and imagine being in that place... or situation... great work i love this...

this was dope bruh, very personal in tone and genuine. damn great read, very well done.

I really like the atmosphere you created here, deep yet still light and airy. Real!

nice piece here, I like the mood and the tempo u get me, the struc and theme is very different but its unique. nice drop.

Thanks for the replies. And lol @ fgee. Still appreciated fam.

I liked this. More abstract and leaning towards poetry if anything. Awkward ass rhyme scheme, but as the story progressed I finally found it. .lol. The tone was real personal and had considerable amounts of truth to it also. This was an refreshing read. Feeling it.