My Rap's feedback plz (only in Lyrics)
alright all i need from all ya'll is sum feedback on my raps positive and negative so i can work on it all and get betta anyways everyday i'll put a new song in here in lyircs of course to get feedback so be sure to keep c'mon back each day thx boiz and galz
"Sellouts"
check check 3-0-4
come back if yo wana buy sum more
of my raps sellin
i'll never quit spittin
me and my hommies be gettin
fame na lil shortie we dont preten we know the dope game
all hoods the same
my hood is yo hood
its all good
we be rollin up
sayin yo was up
"party-hardy up in here
party-hardy up in there"
ya we like to party
lol we like them gals that dike
anybody that aint our hommies
we be lyk mike and take out the jabronies
wit the KO get out the way YO
if i keep dis up we go far up
we follow Fity our shit wont be shitty
we follow game our shit will be lame
we sellout our big bang hit
thats the sound when we spit
dats rite it's me Rik
some say i suk and sum say iam sik
but all the gals know i got the biggest dik
alright enough bout me it's allbout my Gees
"party-hardy up in here
party-hardy up in there"
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"iam back"
I'm here right in front of you
and i can smell yo fear
and so can all the hommies around here
listing to my freestyle
so iam back and its been a while
i'll pick up the beat style
and spit so check out this shit
look at this dope sniffin clown
he dont show his teath cause they so brown
this nigga know i'll throw it up
just as he knew i'd knock his bitch right up
ya i'd say she o-kay
thats why i'll do her in again today
iam on the corner pimpin yo bitches
there on the corner sipin on my
whoops did i almost say it?
wat u gunna do? about it
try me try me is wat she said
and i tried and made her cry
iam on the curb an u bout to learn
that iam the realist
and iam serious
bout my rap
click-clap is wat they do
when i step up and dew the dew
me and my crew role up
i see you wishin u was me
i see you tryin to be dishin on my crew
lookin threw the window
hoping u gunna follow threw
with that dope game
we all the same
sellin drugs clippin thugs
delivering duffles bags
gettin away from home from those nags
so iam offering this one op
ither u join me or stop
cuase if not u'll be buried
if yo lucky u'll be hurried
to the hospitol
u'll be lyk the game
be capped and be in a chair lyk a fool
messin wit us and him
is a low nigga sin
remember and this shit will reflect
the gun is no way the rap
is the way to express
how we feel and the color is how we dress
