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Deadly Art.
Deadly Art.
Locked in a cage society-ruled by poverty,
freedom is so dark and narrow as if we're in an alley
Money so tight here, can't grasp it, it’s so hard
we're to busy holding onto the USA government bars
and eating its flavor of illusion with -100% of reality,
All combine in one and we're getting blind, oh the sanity.
So I express myself, with a can of paint and a wall,
hoping this message will finally loosen this major enthrall,
we're being locked with chains on our feets,
can't hardly move on, so there’s no future for us to reach,
No light on the other side, we need Harriet tub man,
have a miracle and approach to the north, other then
going down south, having dirt of agony on our faces,
We got rash on our tongues so we speak trash in our voices.
In the dark I sit, I shake this society up a little,
unleash its colorful reality, give the illusion a big brittle,
I move in an artistic way with its paint brush, "Oh nice,”
and I'm done, a gallery of art all in one without a price
and why should it be, its freedom and this message,
A beautiful color rainbow, should give people the courage.
I hear matches being flick on and flames hissing,
orange and red making many heads sweating
pores of 'revolution' coming out of many divergent skins,
It’s finally begun, the torrent of people busting in
trying to save this one kid, who created a passion
that he never felt, he's a dream come true virgin
with his hands on metal bars and sentence to death
tears drift down his cheeks, knowing that his breath
is about to be taken by Justice who doesn't care,
living in a society that if you express your freedom affair
they'll take your air and leave your spirits high
In the sky leave your mind replaying over and over "Why?”
A Kid who grew up in the gutter is being washed out
just because he took his spray paint and did a drought
on leaking his emotions on this society -A Rainbow,
we're too busy fighting our own-sending death blows
to the abs and making them puke out the reality
That’s hidden in our insides. It loosens our compact unity.
That’s what the rainbow symbolizes, unity. "Damn yo
its cause of us and this gov, that this kid have to go"
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Not Bad at all man this was a good way to point out something that it didn't seem to be or even if it was
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Lol, you didn't get my piece at all.
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That was a graffiti writers confession if there ever was one
I like the visual imagery of it.the story telling ect
didn't like some of the rhyming syllables a little too much assonance
Peace
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yeah not bad dun. better than a lot of shit been poppin up. shit was wrote tite. and at least attempted to go into some depth of concept and use a somewhat elevated language........ so yea props on that ish....... some rhymes got a bit bleh in few spots. , imagey was str8 forward but there at least. , keep elevating how to make the imagery more concrete and solid. and keep elevating the wording and rhymes then you be on some right tracks i say, yeah cool still
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