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5 barz=10lines
house rules
due in 45 minutes
checkin in now
check and I'll drop after you do
aiight well lets do this
$pit? who are you...seriously in threads i Sweat cause your a Flamer...
Made the Wrong decision already....with ya name should have came with a Disclaimer..
blah
Fuck i slit and Convict....i'm repenting this $pit....
.....your not ill nor sick....
..........with Scripts i send this False champ to SHIT....
Like lottos your odds of winning....reflect ya chance of Fucking
cause when IT comes to Slangin words ...face it I'm being compared to NOTHING....
how can you even show up now...i slaughtered ya fate in 6 lines
more less just keying this shit while you wanted to go last to read Mines
For weak minds...philosophical rhymes i blurt at blink of eyes
Couldn't double your chance of V's even in Gang bangs with Gay Guys
blah blah didn't think it would take much
Yo he's ready for the ring since he's used to people beating him
I'd say you're one fruit cake < that no one will be eating bitch
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You want respect, but you went easy like this wasn't a brawl
If life wasn’t filled with sadness, you wouldn't have life at all
See I'll feast on this turkey like Thanksgiving for the masses
We like skills, punches, flow < all of which you don't have kid
You thinking smart? Bitch get the fuck out of the IKEA store
^^ For that you need a glove....just to catch an idea whore
You're a noob and a liar....your ego is growing way too fast
You wish your punches were Crucial < but he'd kick your ass
let's get some votes up in here....good luck Krewshul
uppin gluck to you also.............................................. .................................................. .................................................
nothing at all ..
vs
You want respect, but you went easy like this wasn't a brawl
If life wasn’t filled with sadness, you wouldn't have life at all
You're a noob and a liar....your ego is growing way too fast
You wish your punches were Crucial < but he'd kick your ass
..simple battle
v. $pit
there wasnt too much that i liked in this battle both of you came pretty meh but spit you had some good likes and i think you also had some played lines, you should Read the LLL to get better it'll give you an idea of harder wordplay and diss' krew your shirt was klame you neda elevate read the LLL and work on it dude
V.SPIT
Quote:
Originally Posted by Gho$t Wrighter
lmao
aiight well lets do this
$pit? who are you...seriously in threads i Sweat cause your a Flamer...
Made the Wrong decision already....with ya name should have came with a Disclaimer..
Okay
blah
Fuck i slit and Convict....i'm repenting this $pit....
.....your not ill nor sick....
..........with Scripts i send this False champ to SHIT....
you fucked up teh stucture
Like lottos your odds of winning....reflect ya chance of Fucking
cause when IT comes to Slangin words ...face it I'm being compared to NOTHING....
streached like whoa
how can you even show up now...i slaughtered ya fate in 6 lines
more less just keying this shit while you wanted to go last to read Mines
lol okay
For weak minds...philosophical rhymes i blurt at blink of eyes
Couldn't double your chance of V's even in Gang bangs with Gay Guys
no
blah blah didn't think it would take much
your shit wouldv'e been good if you hadn't messed up the structure and all this (...) bull shit cut that out fam you can do better than this
Yo he's ready for the ring since he's used to people beating him
I'd say you're one fruit cake < that no one will be eating bitch
meh
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You want respect, but you went easy like this wasn't a brawl
If life wasn’t filled with sadness, you wouldn't have life at all
good personal
See I'll feast on this turkey like Thanksgiving for the masses
We like skills, punches, flow < all of which you don't have kid
Okay
You thinking smart? Bitch get the fuck out of the IKEA store
^^ For that you need a glove....just to catch an idea whore
okay
You're a noob and a liar....your ego is growing way too fast
You wish your punches were Crucial < but he'd kick your ass
your an newb too lol , meh
you had some good shit but this (<) is irelevent trust me it doesn't help but you dropped descent and that was enough to take my vote.... and to the other dude work on your structure dawg you couldv'e tko ed this dude
v/spit
Thanks guys....uppin this battle
uppin again
nothing
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You want respect, but you went easy like this wasn't a brawl
If life wasn’t filled with sadness, you wouldn't have life at all
You're a noob and a liar....your ego is growing way too fast
You wish your punches were Crucial < but he'd kick your ass
meh, one sided all the way through...and I'm too tired to even begin to tell you all the things you didn't do so well. read LLL, hit the cypher, etc. etc.
v/$pit
You want respect, but you went easy like this wasn't a brawl
If life wasn’t filled with sadness, you wouldn't have life at all
You're a noob and a liar....your ego is growing way too fast
You wish your punches were Crucial < but he'd kick your ass
the ikea would of been quoted if worded better.
vs
nothing.
yep. One sided, i liked that sadness line, pretty good.
$pit decent verse from you not much to say.
but El deciple, you need better wording to make your punches direct,
i saw your concepts were alright but ur wording let you down biggy.
vote - $pit