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Bush And Blair
All The Soldiers Scream Out:
"Fuck Tony and George,
Ima Put This Gun Down I aint going to war
Why We Killing These People, Dont We Know Anymore?
Lets Fight The Real Terrorists
Tony And George"
Britain is twisted, the goverments fucked
But do you think it would be different if it wasnt for Bush?
Would it fuck!, Tony Blairs just as good as a crook
We dont know what these politicians are covering up
Fuck Bush too, I wouldnt go to war for him
My name aint Blair, So I aint Georges bitch
What is this? Hypocrits always talking shit
When we was voting we didnt know we was causing this!
Fuck George, Your Religious So The Lord Forgive?
So third world debt? We should call it quits
You and Tony only know how to depress people..
..Create barriers and deem others less evil!
Think About It
9/11 wasnt the day the terrorist started..
.It was when the U.K educated Bin Laden
Britain masterminded his brain..
..Tony Blair might as well of been flying the plane!
Its Ironic, Look what they named the goverment
Labour cos Labour is pain and suffering!
Labour is labour, its consumer friendly
But I refuse to let this system move or bend me!
Its the truth, when I write these bars
Aint no Politician giving me an I.D Card!
So they can track me down with every step that i make
With every word that i say,Tony this is my personal space
But Tony said it so it must be fair!
Serious none of these pussys care
I aint telling you how to live, Just beware
The biggest terrorist ever was always Bush And Blair!
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wow, this was god homie, i really felt it, true statements in this OM, nice use of politics, guess your the type of writer that pays attention to government related things, well anyway, nice use of wording, and nice way of puttin the topical into a form of explaination and and OM..good shit.
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This was pretty interesting.
You stated some very good facts in there, vocabulary was average but you got the message across clearly. The flow was smooth in places but very choppy in others. Try to use the same syllables for each line, it makes the read more fluint and smooth. This was a more straight on piece then a metaphorical piece, so on your next drop I'd love to see more metaphores to make it a more interesting piece and to get your point out there even more. But as I said earlier you stated some things I didn't know, espically the bin laden becoming educated in UK part. I felt your emotion, I really could tell you were into this subject. Imagery is hard to use in these kind of pieces so I can't judge that on you here. So yea I look forward to more. Good Drop
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kool i like the message you were send ing behind this i definently enjoyed this pieace. you made strong points and kept up with the consistancy. the imagery was alright and the figurative language showed up now and then work on that and this would be an good pieace. descent topic you picked it wasn't as interesting as your om though but besides that this was an good pieace.
RTF
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Up.
^ Ill get at your peice later
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Decently written as far as mechanics go. I thought the scheme was rather overly simplistic, but other than that worded Ok. I can't say I feel this OM, but then that is just a matter of personal politics. I read it for what it was, a vent/rant but in the end, Tony nor Goerge were in any place of power when 911 went into it's operational phase. They were just unlucky to have taken office during this very rough time. The events were planend and inacted logn before Bush or Blair were at the helms. So I can't say I feel this at all. It's nice to see people writting and doing so with solid form.
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I like those lyrics. you should make em into full songs or somethin like that.
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this was good. id would give it a 5.5/10
postives were average rhyming, good lines, and good scheme
negatives were simple formula, and aggressive opinion
but, thats what make it unique, and its just my opinion.
favorite bar:
Fuck Bush too, I wouldnt go to war for him
My name aint Blair, So I aint Georges bitch
