Hi.
10 lines.
Due in an hour, no less.
No check-ins.
Seriously though who needs that shit?
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Hi.
10 lines.
Due in an hour, no less.
No check-ins.
Seriously though who needs that shit?
Your gonna get destroyed.
I'll check in.
just to say good luck.
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
http://i3.tinypic.com/2416yqw.gif
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
Read your sig, the flickory words, it's funny.. the shit you be bringin',
'Cuz I think Es.Choir fell asleep on me... kid must'a been singin'.
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
Hows that for ya? I don't expect you to be suprised like mad,
'Cuz I wasn't suprised when i found out you were a fag.
You can't pick your own rhymes, so why you checkin' mine?
I'd finish with asking you to get off my nuts but i never ask a second time.
And that's 1.
This fag is full of self glory, you've seen it, celebrates by himself like it's a Parade.
Explains why I'mma stomp his ass 'n watch how much his band of lines are played.
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
Lord of the pens? shit, this faggot couldn't be lord of the mop and brooms...
'S why I'm here to clean up his act, by knockin the pure crap outta this goon.
So FUCK!, why even try? this dude's better off stabbin himself wit a pencil.
'N I'll make this bitch bleed---like it's this pussy first time on the menstrual.
Like Russian Roulette, you take a chance and try, but this fags luck is surely up.
'N it's ok for Pen's self opinion to go down--ours won't change, we knew he sucked.
my 10...
Up #1.
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
You can't pick your own rhymes, so why you checkin' mine?
I'd finish with asking you to get off my nuts but i never ask a second time.
^lmfao
vs.
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
^barely quotable imo.
Choir i see a lot of potential in your verse, but your wording on concepts is bad and some of your concepts are horrible. Menstrual and shit concepts are wack/played. saying someone has played lines is pretty much played ...as for penlord, i didn't see much bad in it. except i thought 2 of his lines were bland/boring. so pretty much ...
v. Penlord, easily.
Pen
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
Eh wasnt really feeling this
Read your sig, the flickory words, it's funny.. the shit you be bringin',
'Cuz I think Es.Choir fell asleep on me... kid must'a been singin'.
alright personal. could have hit alot harder
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
decent punch. was kind of selfglory though
Hows that for ya? I don't expect you to be suprised like mad,
'Cuz I wasn't suprised when i found out you were a fag.
eh wasnt feeling
You can't pick your own rhymes, so why you checkin' mine?
I'd finish with asking you to get off my nuts but i never ask a second time.
ROFL
All in all i would say you had a Nice verse... nothing that made me laugh out loud or anything like that until you closer that shit was nice. but your structure and flow was onpoint aswell and nothing really played.
Es.
This fag is full of self glory, you've seen it, celebrates by himself like it's a Parade.
Explains why I'mma stomp his ass 'n watch how much his band of lines are played.
Talking about played lines is played.
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
Played
Lord of the pens? shit, this faggot couldn't be lord of the mop and brooms...
'S why I'm here to clean up his act, by knockin the pure crap outta this goon.
Lord of Pens is someone else.. but yeah still played
So FUCK!, why even try? this dude's better off stabbin himself wit a pencil.
'N I'll make this bitch bleed---like it's this pussy first time on the menstrual.
Eh.. still played.
Like Russian Roulette, you take a chance and try, but this fags luck is surely up.
'N it's ok for Pen's self opinion to go down--ours won't change, we knew he sucked.
blah
All in all i would say your verse was played and you had a bit of self glory in there aswell.. it seems to me that you are either biting or are just really slow with new concepts and all
Vote: Penlord
Leave links niggas!!
Pen
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
lol that was iight
Read your sig, the flickory words, it's funny.. the shit you be bringin',
'Cuz I think Es.Choir fell asleep on me... kid must'a been singin'.
haha that was cool.
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
meh.
Hows that for ya? I don't expect you to be suprised like mad,
'Cuz I wasn't suprised when i found out you were a fag.
ok.
You can't pick your own rhymes, so why you checkin' mine?
I'd finish with asking you to get off my nuts but i never ask a second time.
meh ok.
Es.
This fag is full of self glory, you've seen it, celebrates by himself like it's a Parade.
Explains why I'mma stomp his ass 'n watch how much his band of lines are played.
talkin about being played is played lol
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
lol
Lord of the pens? shit, this faggot couldn't be lord of the mop and brooms...
'S why I'm here to clean up his act, by knockin the pure crap outta this goon.
lord of pens isn't pen lord
So FUCK!, why even try? this dude's better off stabbin himself wit a pencil.
'N I'll make this bitch bleed---like it's this pussy first time on the menstrual.
iight.
Like Russian Roulette, you take a chance and try, but this fags luck is surely up.
'N it's ok for Pen's self opinion to go down--ours won't change, we knew he sucked.
ok closer.
in conclusion i think pens had a better verse cuz he had hard hitting punches moslty all the way through and his lines made me laugh more. both had good flow and structure. creativity was descent in this battle and overall i think pens gets my votes
v/pens
hit up the sig.
up #3. leave links. getin' yours now, fatal.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...3&page=1&pp=15
So FUCK!, why even try? this dude's better off stabbin himself wit a pencil.
'N I'll make this bitch bleed---like it's this pussy first time on the menstrual.
^ it was ur best IMO and it was meh. setup could have been stronger
vs.
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
^ thought that was all good.
V- Pen
more quotes and better ones too
Up #4.
3-0.
thanks.
This fag is full of self glory, you've seen it, celebrates by himself like it's a Parade.
Explains why I'mma stomp his ass 'n watch how much his band of lines are played.
^Eh?Old skool-ish.
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
^iight.just not worded right.
Lord of the pens? shit, this faggot couldn't be lord of the mop and brooms...
'S why I'm here to clean up his act, by knockin the pure crap outta this goon.
^Couldve been better,but aiight.nothing amazing.
So FUCK!, why even try? this dude's better off stabbin himself wit a pencil.
'N I'll make this bitch bleed---like it's this pussy first time on the menstrual.
^played.
Like Russian Roulette, you take a chance and try, but this fags luck is surely up.
'N it's ok for Pen's self opinion to go down--ours won't change, we knew he sucked.
^meh.wording!..this was to stretched,I lost intrest in reading it halfway threw.Get to the point next time.
vs.
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
^Meh.
Read your sig, the flickory words, it's funny.. the shit you be bringin',
'Cuz I think Es.Choir fell asleep on me... kid must'a been singin'.
^he,hee.str8
You stay sharp? i spray sparks, best to not play guard,
And I'd put you in my sig list but I heard you're afriad of graveyards.
^naw.
Hows that for ya? I don't expect you to be suprised like mad,
'Cuz I wasn't suprised when i found out you were a fag.
^naw.too basic.
You can't pick your own rhymes, so why you checkin' mine?
I'd finish with asking you to get off my nuts but i never ask a second time.
^good.not really harsh,but effective.
overall/-This battle was aiight,pen won this by having sum up dated wording.an sum aiight..1 good punch...while Es.choir just seem outdated...
v/-pen.
yeah. keys. you do 'em?
You'll need a healing when i puncture your eye socket in a way
That reminds peeps of ya sig ^ 'cuz that shit blinded me for days
*lol haha nice
Read your sig, the flickory words, it's funny.. the shit you be bringin',
'Cuz I think Es.Choir fell asleep on me... kid must'a been singin'.
*aight ha
vs.
He can't compete, he'll fall asleep, this new head's rhymes seem pretty old.
Seein as dude couldn't get any growth--if you left his sorry ass out to mold!
meh
*MEh Battle But Penlord dropped that shit up there that had me laffin so he gotta get dis shit....
V/Penlord