Lyrical Diction

Yeah its lyricaldiction and im here to stay
this chrome 45 revolver gonna pave my way
ima top the charts, while Im stoppin hearts
other rappers usin played lines like public shoppin carts
old dudes can't handle my beat vibrations
my bullets like pornos they invovle multi penetrations
you think you gonna battle me prepare for pain sensations
my rhymes is easy they entertain you like sony playstations
Id like to thank ansane for givin me this beat
when i drop the heat delete all who compete
cociet rhymes concrete im the one none can beat
yeah im on another level always one bar ahead
i spit shit so hard my rhymes could make ya face red
and im not talkin 'bout blushin Im talkin bout ya fuckin blood gushin
adrenaline rushin, you ain't a barrier cause you aint stoppin nothin
i destry mcs my rhymes i can't restrain
50 only got shot eight times the mark on his face is a permenant cum stain
fuck statistics, ligistics its all fuckin lies
i show no respect, piss in an MCs mouth right before the bitch dies
i don't spit lies, I tell the truth in the booth
my punchlines could knock out a tooth
this battle you losin last line and Im cruisin
Ill stand there and laugh at you while Im shootin

this was overall okay

half of it bored me

ima top the charts, while Im stoppin hearts
other rappers usin played lines like public shoppin carts
that was maybe the best line

nice punchlines and everything else though

This was a bad piece, it had no point to it, just another self-boasting drop, it didn't flow well, the rhymes were bad, you had no emotion to any of your lines, your whole piece really bored' me, it didn't pick up any where, nothing screamed out as good, you tryed to use vocab and it didn't work out for you, you really need to elevate big time......

It wasn't that good.

It was too long for me to stay interested.

A few of the lines could have been used for a battle verse

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