A name called anonymous

He was contemplating what his deeds embody
Anonymous to the world, but trying to be somebody
What will I leave behind me? I have no known acclaim
When I die I'll be cremated,
So they can't revel in the irony that only bones remain
And I've seen lonely pain in eyes that despise the satisfied
Which are my eyes... And I can't rise my status high..
So I'm conceited to cover that I'm defeated with blunders
But I take a look at myself and I see it & wonder
How I became what I am, insane with this pen
Only trying to show my true colors,
But I don't like the picture that was painted again
So I'm complaining instead of correcting mistakes
Which adds to the problem, cuz I look rejected & fake
I find the truth, stretch it & take the route that allows me to make
another poem for you, hoping you'll overlook this cowardly face
but think it's courage & grace, and show me affection
& This isn't random word choice.. this is only reflection
Of the emotions that utter themselves as patterns of thought
Till I'm overcome and these thoughts scatter distraught
But they somehow end up on this page, a suction of rage
And it's distorted & believed that a production was made

are you from rv?

You're wack hoe :mad:

This was nice.

Ill multis, and you word everything really well.

I really enjoyed the theme

This was cool. Flow was on point for the most part, except when you did that 3 line style thing and it was off a bit. I even tried to read it out loud and I still couldn't get it, lol, anyway, this was nice for what it was. Short and simple. Real cool topical and I'm feeling the scheme/concept you used with this. You should re-write this/elaborate on this more otherwise I'll jack your topic. Lol. Ask Nahlidge.

this wasnt wack

this is better than most of the ones on this site

You can jack it, Nique. You'd do it better anyway. I'm too impatient...

Dope. It was cool. Vocab deffinetly was on it. Short, but good, imagery was nice. Meh, sorry for the shitty feed. I don't go into Open Mic much.

you know i liiked it man cause it was deep plus you backed it with skill plus your style its dope and flow was on point the whole way through i see what you did with that shit dope man