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A Crew Executioner...
I wonder how many crews will flare after seeing the rubric block
Some not worthy of a larger zone, so they confine themselves in a Cubic Box
To adolescents I give a speech, never 2 intelligent 2 teach the youth
These liars, I don't admire but they inspire me to speak The Truth
I showed them the Art of Balance, when I wrote sumthn on a Reality Check
Requesting info on me leave Painful Inqueries, thanks 4 noticing my intellect
It's apparent that against me, many choose to have a contest deferred
Obviously cuz I'm known 2 Phade them out w/ sumthn Within a Complex Word
No question, after this I already know what I'm in fo'
The only time I'd see The Final Kingz, if the NBA finals was in Sacramento
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Decent vocab throughout, I like the way you used some of the crew names in this and it didn't sound overly forced and constricted. Short but sweet, the last bar through it off a bit because it seems more or less as a punchline. Decent job.
Also, was this meant as a diss?
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Lamo. This was dope. Excellent vocab and really original but unfortunatly this peice will get closed if you dont edit it and add some more lines. read the rules bruh. nevertheless this was a decent lil read.
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Nice Shit B oy you comin at cha!! :roadster:.... I see you on here elevating daily and dropping consistently .... and the drops are decient .. ya vocab is hella good and your wordplay stood out in this one..I like that :boobies: overall this was very good... You really played the Crew Name thing well and I haven't seen that done before In O-M ... If you keep coming up with Topic's that good followed by a longer post you might be up for O-M of the month....Good shit though Keep at it ..
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Rules & Lessons in Feedback<< LINK.
I HAVE TO HARSH ON YOU ALL NOW.
READ THE RULES.
CLOSED.
Reason: Minimum of 16 lines.
-Brix.
