Impeccable Words...

I dropped 'New Comer', & the attention to my name start expanding
It's defeats I'm handing , it's my words now the public demanding
I'm reprimanding these pitiful MC's with lyrics that are so intense
I spit flames that can't be rinsed, ya'll kept fire extinguishers ever since
The consequence u suffer from me in a rap battle is devastating
I love to eradicate the elite and newbz, so of course I'm never hating
A flawless record I'm anticipating, but there might be 1 that's eligible
But they say if my lyrics wasn't already marvelous, they'd be incredible
Conceited...nah, I just a fella with immense knowledge fully embraced
Now go set up that battle, because I'm already waiting trully in-place

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=4702583

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/newr...eply&p=4699646

was good but ive heard better

"was good but ive heard better"

um yea tight feed^^^


ok...flow was tight, didnt notice any multies (looks again) no, nice word play. Flow was lined up.

Best bar I saw was : I spit flames that can't be rinsed, ya'll kept fire extinguishers ever since

Ok...now u leave feed in my thread...

NOw this was nice......A good topic although a self glory piece.....Yet this self glory seems to stand out. I was really felling the way it flowed as i read through it. Although you were lacking on multi's and imagery your vocab is outstanding and I didn't feel that you were forcing anything... Overall this was a NICE DROP and I'd rate this an 8/10.....would've been a 10 if it wasn't a self glory piece......O-M is for more complex pieces....that make the reader aww at certain points..and are filled with emotion....But Good Shit though KEEP AT IT...

Uppin to Number 1

Uppin to Number 1...sum feedback peeps...

Okay, for the topic which was basically "I am better then everyone at rapping," I thought it was pretty weak and basic. This exact same song has been written about seventy thousand different ways, with similar tones, dementedly easy rhyme schemes and some light imagery. Really I never feel the stuff that's like this, so don't think I'm hating on you or something, you maybe could write something I'd like, I just am not on the wagon for this thing right here. Plus you've got like, 35 posts or something on this board shoutin' all that idiot stuff... And I'm sitting here thinking you must be one of the 14 or 15 year old rappers, but it says you're 24... maybe you lied in your profile, who knows.

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Originally Posted by Engivale

Okay, for the topic which was basically "I am better then everyone at rapping," I thought it was pretty weak and basic. This exact same song has been written about seventy thousand different ways, with similar tones, dementedly easy rhyme schemes and some light imagery. Really I never feel the stuff that's like this, so don't think I'm hating on you or something, you maybe could write something I'd like, I just am not on the wagon for this thing right here. Plus you've got like, 35 posts or something on this board shoutin' all that idiot stuff... And I'm sitting here thinking you must be one of the 14 or 15 year old rappers, but it says you're 24... maybe you lied in your profile, who knows.

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Well, before you start coming to definite conclusions about me and my potential, u should do a little research and peep sum of my other work which is in Open Mic/ Front Lines, etc...u don't have to go and search, it's all recent, so don't put a tag on my status based off of one quick key flow I posted...35 posts or 2 posts, my skills still are damn good, homie...

Uppin for feeds...

Dude, Ima give you a chance to add to this. WRITE SOME MORE AND EDIT IT IN. This ain't a cypher.. so hurry up before I close it.

Uppin 4 feeds...