Relationship: The Apologetic Visionary and The Unforgiving Poet

Apologetic Visionary

Romancing flames have burnt out with winters change
In the center of me though, still a flicker remains
A dim glimmer, upon a shimmering golden wick sustains
Well lit to burn through eternity, when the wax is malaise
Intact with my passion my senses have let go of the mundane
Now all that exist to me, is the reminiscent memories ive claimed
Love, i have never and will never shun, or turn my head away
Even if Eden is without it and the heaven's give it no praise
So i refraine from the rest, until i find a felicity in life
Until love wilts like rose pedals and its stem tilts and alights
And returns to the dirt, with dust and cuddled roots alike
Until i meet it there in death, beneath ebony soil and oak blight
Deep infactuation has taken me and to it i am a slave
My chains of lust bind me to never forget my lovers name
And forever i am hers, forever i shall retain
The stale love that use to blossom, in the tender months of spring

Unforgiving Poet

A fire has sparked in the depth of darkness
As you forcefully deny & refuse it
The wax descends its pureness
Loosing sense & releasing its own destiny
Reminiscent memories no longer exist or are claimed
Love shunned & turned into nothinglessness
Eden has no praise without its Heaven
Cannot refrain from life & rest
Love wilted as you let the petals fall
No returning back to where it once came
Sweet engangments no longer occur
& you are freed from my soul
Lusting chains have burst & forgotten the lock of THY name
As Spring arrives this stale love will wither away



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just so you guys know, i know the two styles are alot different, it was purposly made that way.

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This was nice, it's been a while since I've read random poetry, felt good to see in OM. I loved the contrasting styles you incorperated into this work, very nice addition. I thought the diiferences were exceptionally good, as one covered the same concepts in very unique approaches. Langauge was fluid, emotion was felt and imagery was good. A very solid display here, nice to see something different and appealing to my peotic tastes. Very familiar, just can;t place it...

good stuff

thank you. more feed plz. lol.

multies was coo.......... flow was on..... vocab and wording seemed ace...
was mos def emotive flooded.. imagery was on sum smooth shit........yeah was dope..... nice metaphoric quotent gave it a good edge and depth. poetics was ace. crispy new shit........ was nicely formatted structured and all merged together well. yeah.. nice pice

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ive been reading quite alot of OM's and in all honesty this is up there as a good drop, you had pretty much everything. Good multies, good flow and nice structure. also unlike alot of other OM's i didnt get bored, drift off or fall asleep reading this lol.
nice drop