Subliminal?????

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=299402

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=295345

They Say There Strenght In Numbers...Dumb Ass Thought They Were Talking About Post Counts.....

Indeed the need to splurge is ubsurd the nerve of this herb..
When will u learn that words are best heard when spoken with nerve..
Meaning,mesages meant for this specailist should always be direct..
Spit with impotent sex lines never connect so ur never comming correct..
never no what to expect,what u say i choose to neglect due to lack of respect..
im asking whos next cause im never seen yet felt like tattoos on the back of a neck..
young prospect,less postcount yet more modest..
ur the hottest?C4 the hood the way u've constantly blown projects..
principles points and problems changes plenty of views..
so to reverse the curse u lable ya track a site u commonly use?..
not to mention,the fact that u and best were ever in the same santence..
good review,payed ur dues?ya verse would get u a life sentence..
Funny shyt is while readin ya hole verse i was blowin a cig..
and realized you were only ever hard cause of the guns in ya sig
play ya postion fam,stay in line and stick to the main plan..
cause I knew you before,funny how the net made u a man..


be back with my 2 links

Rise!?!?!?

Sup ADR it's been a minute... wus happenin?

umm, seems like a bit of a battle type shit here, but none the less, if u want it 2 b an OM then y not... uhh 2 start off, prolly not my fav topic lol, 4 an OM, but 4 the topic i think u did really well on it... the rhymes was good, and i saw lot's of multis in there which was nice 2 c... the structure coulda used a lil work but it flowed nicely, and that's all that really matters... uhh, there was some wordplay in there, that was good, and the vocab was really well done.. all in all it was a good spit but i'd like 2 c u do a more topical piece wit more emotion and more of a story line... try dat next time man

good work and peep my piece The Cookie Jar... and holla back at ya old boy man, like i said it's been a minute

Ta2_Tears (Word.Play)

damm this is the first piece ive seen like this...
im speaking boout the multiz ...the internal rhymes..
they were strait...was missing a story the rhymes
were random in some places meaning the rhyme took
presidence...though sometimes when i write in this
style peeps have a hard time comprehending...
man i liked this shit just coz it was a suttin different
read to most of the scripts ive read in hurr...
keep it crackin cuzz....peace

Thanks for the feed guys..

Yea it seems like a battle it just some shyt i had to get off my chest..but yea the multis were probly my strong point
ask around thats how u usualy let things go it makes for more fun and complexity some lines seemed randon cause there probly werent understud

but like i said thanks appreciate it def

ta2 ima def peep out the cookie jar..and
G anything u got or need feed on let me no

cool man cool.. whenever u got a spare sec

well this was real nice..your multies in creativity sood out here...nicely put though it seemed a little too much but hey who am i to complain...nice man really go to the site i PM'd you and join the topical league man its dopeness!.

ok this was nicely read. nice emotion structure Meh....not that greath but multies in this shit was great man NICE!..upping this for my FAM!

I'm not sure who you're so angry about, but it doesn't seem like an open mic kind of piece. That being said, it's pretty cool, I liked the multies you were using in your lines, I always appreciate good flow, and tihs had that. Keep up the work, but next time I'd like to see something on a topic that is not directed towards some other rapper, that's more for challenges and battles and shit.

Ack.

Venting your anger a little bit on this piece? I noted your attempt at nice wordplay, but the topic's been done before. The whole screw this herb, blow up the hood, it seems old to me. I saw your multis in here, and they were overall nice, but the vocabulary was nothing special. Basic, at first but then you start to pick up on the wordplay and the scheme you had in here.

Alright, but topic is played.