Renovate.

it's the new season.

im the new reason, so everyone pay attention to who's speaking
you dude's eating mighta built the house, but the roof's leaking
the walls wobbly, yall steal clappers never seen a hawk, probaly
law watchin me, most of yall REAL rappers, probaly never saw poverty
better start gettin yours ..dont even know what they spit in this for
it just isnt raw when all you need is a credit card to get in the door
i want mine kid, wins low but sure enough ...im gonna up my wins
the windows are boarded up, can someone please let some sunshine in
please let someone sign him, cos' i rep hard speaking
they take me as being shaky, just cos' the steps are creeking
if it aint about money and hoes, its about the coke, weed, bottles
but that shit is honestly getting old, so i hope we re-model
and talib, common, mos ..nope, im not even reppin these dudes
cos' i dont really lisetn to'em but when i do, they get repetive too.
but word is, you need to stop serving the dudes that need rock
grab a real hammer, some nails ..and nail'em in some sheet rock
so beat asses, send the rest of your best heat at us
..save the best for now and get the rest of the leaks patched up
cos' we dont gotta rebuild, and thats something im quick to say
that shit is gay cos' what hapened before us makes this what it is today

im the new reason, so everyone pay attention to who's speaking
you dude's eating mighta built the house, but the roof's leaking
the walls wobbly, yall steal clappers never seen a hawk, probaly
law watchin me, most of yall REAL rappers, probaly never saw poverty

if it aint about money and hoes, its about the coke, weed, bottles
but that shit is honestly getting old, so i hope we re-model

^stand out lines^ the rest was good... decent read, nice play
overall flow was good and easy to read... got it goin on

THIS WAS A GOOD READ. IT WAS A NICE SOLID VERSE. GOOD VOCAB, FLOW, STRUCTURE, AND WORPLAY. I THINK YOU COULD WORK A LITTLE ON METAPHORS AND CREATIVITY. OVERALL I LIKED THIS. GOOD JOB

MY FAVORITE LINES WERE

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Originally Posted by Mets

but word is, you need to stop serving the dudes that need rock
grab a real hammer, some nails ..and nail'em in some sheet rock

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I completely agreed with Stay-Z on which lines i thought were the really good ones, that made you stop and read them again because they were so lyrically enjoyable and came together very smoothly. nothing else was as good as those, but the entire thing was solid and I thought very well done.

Also thanks for keeping it to a 16-bar kinda thing, I hate the long drawn out things on this board sometimes, you approached your topic and summed it up pretty quickly. hope to see more of ya.

i keeps it simple and to the point, thanks fellas. leave some links and i'll hit it up.