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Left Alone
i dont get why do i gotta feel this way
somebody give me a route to escape
i need to get away from all this pain
right now i just wish i was slain
if you knew how i felt you'd understand
cant cry tho i want to cuz ima man
i thought it was all good but is not
lord please let me know when the hurt gon stop
the hurt dont stop it just piles up
i guess i was born to be hurt, life is rough
you dont want me to go so i wont go
i'll just sit here alone crushed at home
ill be by my-self i dont need nobody else
ya words hit me so hard that they left welps
so now untill i die i dont need no help
ima just sit here lettin my heart melt
dont need no hook i just keep flowin
my hearts been broke but i keep goin
no cure for the way i feel at the moment
i just hope to catch this feelin and condone it
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ok i see you took the short n direct approach.. that was fine, but u lacked a actuall scheme, it's the the one you had was so basic it hurts n ya vocab coulda mede up for it, but it was so simple.. i know sometimes simple is good, but this was a lil to simple.. work on using image words to help give life to ya writtens, does it 100% suck.. no i've seen people come wayyyyy worst, so just take this as constructive feedback, no i'm not saying i'm better than you in any type of way. i know how you newbs are
overall keep @ it n keep dropping
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im not a newb lol
i was in your crew once
