Slowly

I look up, as a tear rolls slowly down my cheek
I think about the better days, and I wonder if I'll ever feel that way again
You look at me, with those eyes I know so well
Always serious yet loving, so deep and insightful, as though you're always in control
but not today, not now
Now you look so scared, like for once you dont have the answer
I gaze at you, looking into those brown eyes that I fell in love with
Hoping that you would still love me and understand
How you could've said those things, I sit and wonder for a moment, if this is all a dream
If I can wake up in the morning and have you there and I'll be relieved
You're looking at me with such a confusion, a confusion I have never seen before
You slowly pull me towards you and wipe the tears from my face
As you whisper that you're leaving and disappear without a trace

aint rhyme as much.. but poems dont gotta rhyme.. creative.. seems like sometyhing was on ur mind when u wrote this.. stay up

This piece was below average you had no structure,rhyme scheme was horrible vocabulary wasnt that great no multiples it was very basic there was no imagery and i dont feel like you stayed on topic and you didnt execute your point across because you got lost along the way