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yo, u ak 47 dawg well im a mack10/
this battles over, no need to even begin/
write ya rhyme nigga, go ahead post it up/
eatn fast foods the only way ull eva blow up/
listen kid, i dont mean to offend/
but u supposed to have a crew, n u got 1 friend/
alright yall, time to finish this scrub/
is this the same kid i payed to clean my dubs/
well ak i hope u gotta full clip/
cuz u gotta go home now, n its a long trip/
your raps like 'crack heads' takin breaks to 'smoke cans'
you aint a 'hustler', you 'schuffle roses' for the 'pope van'
you aint a 'dopeman' growin 'pot' to get the 'stoners high',
your fake 'punch' is jokin lame.........it aint 'bona fide' *1
you dont identify with standards, your raps a disaster,
i spit hotter than then sunrays that leaves your back burnt,
you aint no master. you apprentice a player assistant *2
and your rhymes so whack you compare to barely resistin
primarily bitch when you even approach a mic,
your more fucked than geisha,with a mistress to coachin ya life
*1 bona fied: authentic,
http://dictionary.reference.com/sear...&q=bona%20fide
Aight Aight
let tha votes begin
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uppin damn letz get votes plz............................................... .........................
personally i thought this was how it stood:
write ya rhyme nigga, go ahead post it up/
eatn fast foods the only way ull eva blow up/
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you aint a 'dopeman' growin 'pot' to get the 'stoners high',
your fake 'punch' is jokin lame.........it aint 'bona fide'
primarily bitch when you even approach a mic,
your more fucked than geisha,with a mistress to coachin ya life
so v/ AK47 cause even tho i think both verses could of been better cause and some points the flow and structure were off n the punches didnt come strong enough i think his punches were better
~*PsYcHo*~ ..
vote//ak47 for havin a decent verse other dude elevate waz wack!! enough sd no hate!!
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this was my first battle its wack as shit........................................lol... ................................
v//ak47 4 da sheer fact that he cum wif sum complex stuff....n wel, i dnt really need 2 giv an ansa i mean bonafied....i didnt really try did u, n if u did...well elevate, no hate tho man
v//ak