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pressure buildin
So much shit in my head i gotta get it out
i got deez lame niggas out back screamin what u be about
purpously pushin my buttons but i aint no glutton 4 petty bullshit
no time 2 waste no post and haste
nigga wait till i confront u face 2 face.. u'll waste away right before me
ur biggest mistake would be to ignore me
im the biggest problem in cicero especialy when i hit da dro
like popeye thats my spinage
the reflection in the mirror is not my image
im the menace to the little villiage that raid and pillage
4 kicks ill extinguish ur existance in an instance
da shit dat keeps me alive is my persitance 2 never die
like da ny king im immortal ill overcome any task cordal like nas
or ras kas but dats old skool im da new skool and my mike is my tool
my mind is my weapon my life u try 2 threaten and u'll cease 2 exist
ur a disease like clamidia and im the cure so i gotts 2 get ridd of ya
i fear no man or god i can see through ur fasad ur a fake, a phony
lookin at me nigga u dont know me ill merk u and ur homie
so da next time u c me nigga just fuck of and leave me be
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you got trsucture and flow no punches really or metaphors which for your delivery you kind of what you want build on that you aint garbage so you only need to work on it
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uppin..appreciate all the comments
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nice job, ok verse, you need ta elevate a bit though, you need creativty, and wording, you need muti's also, and oyu need imagry, you did ok for a newbie.
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