-
Hell Driven
Pull in wisdom like the triggers of a gun
Crowds like warriors try to sustain knowledge
Approach the kingdoms like blood clottage
Reenacts historical elements and reminders
Bloodshed leaks amongst all the fighters
No war is little, civil anxiety corrupts society
Each man's story paints the picture of irony
A rebirth then results into this renaissance
Artistic symbols display italian restaurants
Economic stability remains still like statues
As the hidden enemy then comes at you
Attacks barbaric rituals the lyrical crucifixion
Non-fiction, the love addiction performs addition
Due to religion, beliefs unleash the apocalypse
This no gang shit, its million times blood and crips
Riots emerge, fuses of fire combust at the core
Stores flame came nearby like normandy's shore
World War II imperialistic expansion spreads
As many lay dead from what a dictator said
Guillotine of many countries problematic situation
Statistics converge into this mathematic equation
This aint nerd rap, you just first heard rap
I strap like bulletproof vests defendin mishaps
The Mao Tse Tung, controls like production boards
Split a fuckers head by these sharp swords
Strong like a Malcolm X speech givin real visions
1960's, people these days under my suspicions
Intentions hidden in the face, but look at the eyes
Displays lies, hypocrits covered in ultimate disguise
Commercialism is an artist's enemy knocks the charts
The artist put into this sweatshop as realism departs
I call it shipment overseas resides in other countries
Companies reside in third world where people hungry
The sun too bearing to stand within this lost desert
Hell arises when no one gives their 100% effort
linkz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...35#post4484135
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...42#post4484142
-
I like this, u had a lot to say and kept it consistent with nice rhyming. The flow was hot and easy to read and understand while keepin it complex, but some of the words u rhymed could have been much better and some of the lines could have been worded better. for the most part shit was poetic and lyrical so keep it up.
here's a link to my piece, plz return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post4486300
-
i thought this was avery hot peace consistant in every element i regret not checking your work sooner if you have other work id liek to see more.
-
