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The Pain..
A Cool Breeze Blows A Trees Leaves With Ease..
You Can Hear It - Its The Spirit Those Deceased..
To Please The Eyes, A Sunset Of Creative Colors..
Seven Wonders, Heaven's Brothers Protecting Others..
The Night Becomes Cold; Memories Are Growing Old..
Officers Of Law And Heroes Of War Get No Respect..
Protesting Conflicts ?
They Are Just Doin They're Job With No Regrets..
It Reflects The Moon In June Like The Crystal Lake..
Murdering Youth..
This Is Proof Enough To Stop Shootings With Pistol Brakes..
Lisps On Stakes, Tongues Clamped So Theres No Lip Mistakes..
Now Its Christmas Day..
The Stars Die Out For Those Who Pray..
Dreams Are Shattered, But The Memories Will Stay..
Fighting Bravely, Lighting Graves Are All They See..
Still Blood Pumping, But The Veteran Heart Is Empty..
Clouds Covering, No One Is Recovering, Life Is Poor..
No Children Killers, Just Written Pillars, The Wife Is Sure..
Spit On And Snubbed, Theses Role Models Are Shown No Love..
Time Is Simple, Life Changes Deranges The Purest Of Doves..
Ea$y..
Leave Replies, I'll Return The Favor..
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very poetic that amps serious writting punches lagged but thats it other then that i didnt see flaw.
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Thanks For The Reply..
Maybe I Should Have Posted This In The Poetry Section,
I Wasn't Aiming For Punches, It Has Underlying Meaning
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this was cool here. short but cool. i liked the wordplay and flow was decent.
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