Just a few bars for those who forgot me

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Yo yo let me start off by saying fuck these garbage ass punk ass fake ass commercial bitches word up. these cats making Jarule look like a real battle rapper nah mean?

HEY YO WHO DAT?????????/
Noncentz the last of a dying breed.....freed
A disease that leaves bling emcees on 34's with Christopher Reid.
He, who flows rigorous, talents indigenous, stays vigorous
Punch lines ripping freestyles, hook rupturing ligaments
So hazardous and cancerous surgeon general
Will focus their warnings on me instead of cigarettes.
Smashing your grill into peaces like the former Soviet Union
diss me? Nobody cares like Brand Nubians reunion.
Fuck you young bucks gun talk your 50 cent unit aint got clips
I’ll Set on the Game like I claimed Crip.
Who next to get ripped on text talking shit without rehearsing
Is foolish aint no bitch diss me since I was a virgin
Dropping bars to the extent my content sounds like I’m sick of being bent
Drowning emcees in the flow like laundry detergent.
been warned you but you act like you know who you fucking with
I aint a mistress bitch, whack niggus get seen more then Tara Reids nip slip.
Just like quickies I won’t hesitate to bust.
Taking 40's to the mind like a milf sluts, in 69’s
Sick and tired of whack tracks where each line’s redundant
Im from the real streets these g~unit only appeal to teen summit
Bitches that plan drive byes see me and gun~it.
Noncentz stay constant with consonants herd across continents
To many want to be Makeveli's, im bringing an A~PAC~O~LYPSE.
Rocking this fuck it....im rocking the populous
in battles charged enough to light a metropolis.
THE NOVALIST with zero tolerance for avarice ...
So ill when he spit his cd cover comes with aids prevention pamphlets
Come and get me mother fuckers but you won’t cause your cowards
The day you defeat me will be on the 25th hour.
I fought tooth and nail in the booth bringing the wrath of hell
But my math and scales don’t equate I guess the truth don’t sell.
So from now on im showing proof like alcoholic beverages
Verbal leverages, After this anti abortionists will turn pro miscarriages.

upping

uppin this for love where my flatlinerz fam at

yo, straight piece, the flow and rhymes were creative and smooth, techinical with nice multi's. you can def rhyme man.

thanx twin

Yeah this is ya usual stle, with the aggresive punches that dig into the concious and i liked the flow as well. the vocab though not excellent was deffinetly very high....as in the way you created the rhymes in ya punches to the point that i was like Oh Shit! haha....you still got it goin' so yah keep it up

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Originally Posted by Mak P

Yeah this is ya usual stle, with the aggresive punches that dig into the concious and i liked the flow as well. the vocab though not excellent was deffinetly very high....as in the way you created the rhymes in ya punches to the point that i was like Oh Shit! haha....you still got it goin' so yah keep it up

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thanks twin uppin this

anyways being slept on i thank those that peeped it though

it was alright man but not that special, you had no complexity or vocab..

.check this----

I leave lumps on MC's like rotten fogotten cheese
I beat 'em swiftly quickly through sick extremities
You couldn't be....
any position even close to me, never in a million years
Your raps the equiavalent to corn, Corny flows-a million ears
I cause fear...
To erupt inside the depths of ya chest
I'll spare you cuz you nice, But i slice up the rest

:Thats's how you do it man, not tryin to be cocky just helpin ya out...:

-check my new OM-The World As Portrayed.

thanks

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Originally Posted by Pen'sill.

it was alright man but not that special, you had no complexity or vocab..

.check this----

I leave lumps on MC's like rotten fogotten cheese
I beat 'em swiftly quickly through sick extremities
You couldn't be....
any position even close to me, never in a million years
Your raps the equiavalent to corn, Corny flows-a million ears
I cause fear...
To erupt inside the depths of ya chest
I'll spare you cuz you nice, But i slice up the rest

:Thats's how you do it man, not tryin to be cocky just helpin ya out...:

-check my new OM-The World As Portrayed.

thanks

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no offenece and i do appreciate the advice and will work on it but if your going to show me an example make it a solid one that was horrible.

uppin this for the last time