Worst Feeling In Da World

i been prayin for better dayz but the lord aint answer
things get better than worse like my dads girlfriend havin cancer
or the kids that have no homes and they live on da streets
then ya got the fucked up kids that beat ya up if ya even speak
image if ya had a dad for all ya life and then found out he wasnt ur dad
man i know that shit would make ya sad even worse ya flip on ya mom
and then she'd get mad or if u found out ya were havin a kid
but the baby was gunna die that shit happened to me and it made me cry
when i herid her say that my mouth went dry like i was high
then when i thought about it i said to myself is there even a heaven
in da sky after that things got better than my bestfriend since grade 3
gets shot in a drive by R.I.P Kevin born dec 2 and died in on the
15th of july thats my life thats just beeen unfurled holla back and drop feed if u ever had the worst feeling in da world!

this was obviously more of a venting write. which is fine, thats what writing is good for a way to express your feelings...which if that is about you and all true, sorry to hear all that, n hope things get better...however regardless by dropping as u did..if you expect above average feedback..u will be dissapointed...it was lacking a lot of the necessities to a good piece...you lacked imagery,vocab,wordplay,internals...etc all that really shined throughout the piece was the fact that it may have been personal, and you need to get it out..so the emotion for ppl who can relate was definetly felt...next time even if u are just venting try to make it a worthy OM something that ppl will be like WOW how real is that ya know!

keep on keepin on tho man

things will get better

thanks yo very much homie...and i hope soo