ok 10 line battle.....45 mins.....
i'll spit first........
good luck.....
none of the obvious shit votes.....ok
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ok 10 line battle.....45 mins.....
i'll spit first........
good luck.....
none of the obvious shit votes.....ok
ok at the rules
i'm here
ok.....i'm just about to drop.....
looks like i could have done in 30 lol
dam your offline????....ah fuck it....
your an ugly bitch---wouldn't fuck you with a strangers dick
i hit with fists...the gap between us is wider than ya pussy lips
think your nice? you need to elevate...right now u don't suffice
i would say just be yourself----but i know THATS BAD ADVICE!
now twice i hit you....but bitch you couldn't make me flinch
i'm punishing this pussy...like my dicks a fully extendable 18 inch
like the grinch...you don't fit-in-here...time to crunch
my words make you bleed...like it's that time of the month
now seriously vixen...you say you hate hippies...i know why it's true
cus dam i guess i'd hate nature...if it did to me as it did to you!
got 5 mins left posting soon
i'll back smack you hommie, untill my hand's apart of yo lips
so when it connects..
it'll sound like it had so much reverb, it'll make ya audio pissed
i know your a fag hommie, your a let down you shurely did fellas(fail us)
audio then licked so many mails, he made the envelopes jealous
i can guarantee he'll use some played pussy jokes from the start
so i'll jab this pencil threw his chest so he can write from his heart
i'm underestimated with generated punches that'll leave you cremated son
i don't like hanging with guy's bitches, but i can't help if i'm raping with one
i see ima have to dig you a ditch cuz i'm killing this bitch
so i guess i'll neuter your dick an get audio fixed
:boobies:
audio-u came weak.no real dissin only talkin about her bein a bitch n shit.u underrestimeted her and thats why u wont get my vote.i know cuz i did that to a girl and i lost big time.but beside that ur verse didnt have an hard hitin ounches bad structure.
philly-also weak.nothin much but i liked it.it was funny.u didnt have any hard hitin punches neither but at least u tried.and u contionously talk about audio whats with that:) but u were better
V//phillys
your an ugly bitch---wouldn't fuck you with a strangers dick
i hit with fists...the gap between us is wider than ya pussy lips<---not feelin
think your nice? you need to elevate...right now u don't suffice
i would say just be yourself----but i know THATS BAD ADVICE!<---iight
now twice i hit you....but bitch you couldn't make me flinch
i'm punishing this pussy...like my dicks a fully extendable 18 inch<---lol...
like the grinch...you don't fit-in-here...time to crunch
my words make you bleed...like it's that time of the month<---decent punch
now seriously vixen...you say you hate hippies...i know why it's true
cus dam i guess i'd hate nature...if it did to me as it did to you!<---iight
vs
i'll back smack you hommie, untill my hand's apart of yo lips
so when it connects..
it'll sound like it had so much reverb, it'll make ya audio pissed<---decent nameplay/opener
i know your a fag hommie, your a let down you shurely did fellas(fail us)
audio then licked so many mails, he made the envelopes jealous <---good punch
i can guarantee he'll use some played pussy jokes from the start
so i'll jab this pencil threw his chest so he can write from his heart<---iight
i'm underestimated with generated punches that'll leave you cremated son
i don't like hanging with guy's bitches, but i can't help if i'm raping with one<---so-so
i see ima have to dig you a ditch cuz i'm killing this bitch
so i guess i'll neuter your dick an get audio fixed<---lol
overall
audio
couple decent punches, some iight flow
dont ever use that opener again
liked ur 3rd bar most
vix
nice punches, good technical drop, liked your personalz
vote
vixen
iight battle, to me it seemed one sided, phillys V. dope verse girl, nice punchlinnes, personals, and was pretty consistent than your opponent for the most part, one or 2 lines seemed a bit strectched or forced, but overall you did the job, good verse towards your opponent, some decent wordplay, other homie not feelin ya verse, was reaLly inconsistent, work on stronger concepts and puynchlines, be more personal, pv gets my vote, already explained above pz.
Philly gets my vote easy, She had all the right punches. Audio said played bars from a year ago.
My vote: Philly Vix
upping for the first time allowed
your an ugly bitch---wouldn't fuck you with a strangers dick
i hit with fists...the gap between us is wider than ya pussy lips
7/10
think your nice? you need to elevate...right now u don't suffice
i would say just be yourself----but i know THATS BAD ADVICE!
8/10
now twice i hit you....but bitch you couldn't make me flinch
i'm punishing this pussy...like my dicks a fully extendable 18 inch
7/10
like the grinch...you don't fit-in-here...time to crunch
my words make you bleed...like it's that time of the month
8/10
now seriously vixen...you say you hate hippies...i know why it's true
cus dam i guess i'd hate nature...if it did to me as it did to you!
9/10
( dam i like your flow on this 1 homie nice punches too)
vs
i'll back smack you hommie, untill my hand's apart of yo lips
so when it connects..
it'll sound like it had so much reverb, it'll make ya audio pissed
7/10
i know your a fag hommie, your a let down you shurely did fellas(fail us)
audio then licked so many mails, he made the envelopes jealous
9/10 first line sucked
i can guarantee he'll use some played pussy jokes from the start
so i'll jab this pencil threw his chest so he can write from his heart
6/10 if your gona feed do better nex time
i'm underestimated with generated punches that'll leave you cremated son
i don't like hanging with guy's bitches, but i can't help if i'm raping with one
8/10
i see ima have to dig you a ditch cuz i'm killing this bitch
so i guess i'll neuter your dick an get audio fixed
6/10
(had some good ideas in there but you wasnt consistant in this battle work on ya flow)
ima have to give this to audio fix better flow and came consistant through his battle
\/=audio fix ^^
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Originally Posted by -Carcass-
exactly
werd^...lol....vote goes to sexi vixen.Quote:
Originally Posted by Culprit