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Inner Anguish
It started out with just little things
Was all about the edrenaline and rush
Wasnt til later i found out hope brings
Nothing but shit you have to keep hush
Feelin shady around all my family and friends
Hit the teens and thats when i started heavy
Acted fake around everyone and tryed to pretend
That i would have no conciquences for it in the end
We started out with just all the simple stuff
One night i remember when it got real rough
They came home in the middle of the job see
And i knew the fall was bound to all hit me
Got out and went right back to workin the block
Did this house the last thing i grabed was an xbox
And when i saw the blues i knew our time was bought
Stuck wondering how we could have gotten caught
Turned eighteen and had spent two years in the pen
Had been out for six weeks and went right back in
Because someone rated, But wait wasnt he my friend?
So now im sitting here writing this, at twenty years old
With my mind gettin old, and as everything else turns cold
I wonder if ten years is right for my story to finally be told
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dude this was nice bro i seriously love the emotion man, u had average voabulary, and a pretty decent imagery, but the emotion and rhyme scheme is what i liked most about the peace i can really relate man...
btw is this fact or fiction?
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This would be fact.... just had court today and they gave me an extension til april 25th because mine was the only felony charge that day so they had to give me an extension and they gave me this thing called a discovery and it got all the information they got against me and will use against me in trial and all the witness statements even the one from this nigga that supposed to be my boy but yet he ratted me out with the quickness
but yeah thanks for the feedback fam its always appriciated... wrote this in like 25 minutes after talking to sharp so i thought i'd put alittle feeling into a piece this time so i took an extra 5 minutes and wrote some true life shit
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true....werdness to that goodshit man
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