'Bored' State

I'm searchin within myself,
it's emergin out from my lifes wealth,
becoming enraged,
keep it caged,
leave it, can't commit,
can't sit, gotta spit,

Gotta race, fast paced,
finish first, 'fore i burst,
live it, blind spit,
'fore im placed up in a hearse
thats it, fuck this,
can't manage, another verse
spilled out, out of time...
world cancers spread into my mind,
travels down, attacks my heart,
feelin i once had, now departs

i am transformed, to rest and think,
to groom my own appearance,
to smoke and drink, covered in bling,
this generation leaps with greavance,
be who you be, it is lifes price,
rather than act 'generic' on a rap-site.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...20#post3880520

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...34#post3880634


This is just something I was thinking about while lookin at some of the threads on RB. Pretty much a 'freestyle' kinda thing. It's short but to the point.

wow.

Upping for feedback...............................

eh.

lol, loving this quality feedback

lets
up
this

kid all i got to say is check out legends and old leagues for topical help

Topical help?

What's wrong with my topic? It's a play on words, as in 'the state of these rap battle forum boards' and that i'm 'bored' with how it gets 'played' every single day with nearly every single post.

Also, I don't want to look onto other people for ideas about 'unfortunate soldier' bullshit or the old 'where im from' crap trying to convince people im from a bad neighbourhood.

this was pretty basic dawg. you need to up your shit hardcore.