Excerpt from Rainy Nights... HollowBones ft. Mr. E...

I rock chains n' my white tee, proclaim they dispite me,
since those rocks... n' chains... chained me up on that white T...
a swarm when I thus begin,
to warn you... not to throw that dust in the wind...
thus it's just protection, I stay down there,
we aint gotta dumb it down just to play round here...
not the same as DC... how you figure?
they don't sell crack round there... just give it to niggers...
sorry Common... we bleed on the corner,
gun store, cig shop, gun store n one more for liquor...
when it rains it pours, either...
that's how the saying goes n' went... before she met Katrina...
this aint even from the caucasoids mouth,
we claimed that shit first... Nigga... I'm rapin the south...
I admit Atlanta's great... it aint the shit bruh,
there's a million segregated towns... you don't know shit of...




Yea... I'll leave feed on something a little later...

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I admit Atlanta's great... it aint the shit bruh,
there's a million segregated towns... you don't know shit of...

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This was my favorite lines. The whole thing was hot, I liked it man. Stay on your game. Could you please check out the battles in my sig and vote on them. I need em closed so I can battle again.

Drop was gd shit
Flow not bad
Structure improvin
Rhymth kk
keep@it

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Originally Posted by Kongol

Drop was gd shit
Flow not bad
Structure improvin
Rhymth kk
keep@it

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structure... improvin..?



1... how would you know... I never drop here...
2... it's not a text structure...
3... you're a moron.

Ill 16 man, I just wish I knew the beat this was written to, so I can do it justice in the read. Some real raw concepts here, you come off rantish, so I assume this is delivered hot on a up tempo beat? Nice verse, and boo at the text kids not knowing the difference. Dope @ caucasoids, I think I've only ever heard that reference once before in a stoned ass conversation. Politcal yet, not on the surface, so some are going to let it pass them by.

Thanks for stopping in bro.

Ima beast in these streets, i make you niggas bet yo feet, make your moms
suck on my meat. i carry my heat, nigga be tryin to kill me, but only if these
bitch niggas new that this shit is tryin to heel me, I no all ya niggas feel me
For my niggas in New York, just chill B, I keep this shit real for real see, Im Da
King in D.C, Gurls love me like Weezy, All these niggas is Cheezy, They tryin
na suck my wee wee, But these niggas must of forgot that IMA G, IMA G!!!!




I AINT WITH NOBODY, BUT I NEED TO BE WITH SOMEBODY

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Originally Posted by Scar

Ima beast in these streets, i make you niggas bet yo feet, make your moms
suck on my meat. i carry my heat, nigga be tryin to kill me, but only if these
bitch niggas new that this shit is tryin to heel me, I no all ya niggas feel me
For my niggas in New York, just chill B, I keep this shit real for real see, Im Da
King in D.C, Gurls love me like Weezy, All these niggas is Cheezy, They tryin
na suck my wee wee, But these niggas must of forgot that IMA G, IMA G!!!!




I AINT WITH NOBODY, BUT I NEED TO BE WITH SOMEBODY

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Don't post whackness like this in OM, and more importantly never in someone's OM thread. That was pathetic, so please keep that shit to yourself.

this was pretty pimp tight man....
flow was nice nice
structure was aight
rhythm was cool keep at it chicken dat was ill

That was hot

Flow and Rhythm both pretty tight

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Originally Posted by Bounce

Ill 16 man, I just wish I knew the beat this was written to, so I can do it justice in the read. Some real raw concepts here, you come off rantish, so I assume this is delivered hot on a up tempo beat? Nice verse, and boo at the text kids not knowing the difference. Dope @ caucasoids, I think I've only ever heard that reference once before in a stoned ass conversation. Politcal yet, not on the surface, so some are going to let it pass them by.

Thanks for stopping in bro.

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it's a tie in verse... not my song... not on a up tempo beat... on a bananas like track... go listen to Sdizzles Rainy Night in Georgia... I redid the beat... sick.

Nice drop, I like to read shit like this occasionally. It makes a change from reading all the corny ponies dropping that pseudo-intellectual garbage in every piece. Flow was definatly on in this, read real smooth. It actually reminded me of how Jay comes in on that "What d'you want?" track, especially from here on:

I rock chains n' my white tee, proclaim they dispite me,
since those rocks... n' chains... chained me up on that white T...
a swarm when I thus begin,
to warn you... not to throw that dust in the wind...

It seemed to have the same flow as I read it. All in all, not bad. I enjoyed it.

Stick around bro, I aint seen you post in forever.

Pz!

word... big ups to Cam diddy.