Final Forces (Tribute to our troops) "Ture story"

24/7 bullets and blood flying every where but why people dieing,
Family at home sitting, worried sick and every one is crying,
Letters from family to troops. troops to family it's all un-fine,
People dieing every day, yet the president doesnt care time to take a line,
Eminem speeks the truth "Lets put bush out there with a ak-37",
If bush dies we wont care, He sure as hell wont go to heaven,
I got a older brother over there, tears running down my face,
It scares me to think of him leaving the human race,
Lets see me in the white house, i'll but a bullet or two in bush i dont care,
Fuck this time of life i wish i wasn't alive, This shit ain't fucking fair,
When we get a new president, i'll have my brother back,
Lookin into bush's eyes in anger, I'll give him a good smack,


Men risking their lives every day,
Yet no one has any thing to say,
Well i have my own fuckin sources,
Thats why i'm gonna lead the final forces,


Goverment dont care about us poor folks they get their fucking money,
Hell I look out my window waiting, For the day to be sunny,
Red, white and blue right, wrong the flag is covered in red,
Blood every where, Nothings being announced or being said,
In god we trust, Hell i sure as hell hope so, God im trusting you bro,
My time is going to come where i gotta fight, I got time to grow,
Please god keep my brother nice and safe, i'm waiting for it,
Bush will die, i'll make sure of it, that lil peice of shit,
Kyle i'm waiting for you man, When you get home we'll celebrate,
I'll invite every one man, Even you old college room mate,




Men risking their lives every day,
Yet no one has any thing to say,
Well i have my own fuckin sources,
Thats why i'm gonna lead the final forces,


Here i am, waiting at the store still, whats this a note from the army,
Tears running down my family's face, Me and my mommy,
Sara my girlfriend see's it and hugs me sadly,
Kyle ain't coming back, Now i'm really mad G,
Bush you better watch you back, cuz i'll be shooting it,
You better watch you fucking ass, cuz i'll be booting it,
Never ever ask me to go to war, cuz i'll fucking kill you,
Oh by the way yes every thing i'm saying it true,
Death awaits you mr.President there is a fucking reason,
Your gonna die, before the fucking change in season!


Men risking their lives every day,
Yet no one has any thing to say,
Well i have my own fuckin sources,
Thats why i'm gonna lead the final forces!

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Get em thoughts in now. :2thumb: :coolio: :angelsmil

Rise.

i get what your feeling, my dad is in Iraq right now and he left a while back... it sucks though..


as for the track it was some real nice shit, considering the topic. keep up the work...

yeah.
Thanks.
G/L to your dad.
I hope he dosn't end up like my brother.

ya, all you gotta do is hope this shit ends and everyone else can come home... sorry bout ya bro 2 man...........

yeah.
thanks.
Bush is gonna fucking die.

You want in my crew? :coolio:

Your second link wasn't decent feedback. Edit in a link where you went into some detail or this will get closed. Thanks.

i was in irag for 6 months the horros there made a man out of me i thought the streets were tough we have no idea what it is really like...
your topic hit a soft spot in me...your delivery varied from hot to mediocore but i felt the raw feeling in you that made up for tthe little peaces that didnt fit the puzzle.
for someone to write such thoughts is barve this subject could backfire if conveyed wrongly. you did a good job and i like this alot.

that was good

Wow man, im feeling that peice ALOT, ive just wrote a peice on the war in iraq, check it out if you wish
The subject was real good, and the vocab and flow was on point, there was one part i really liked and hit the spot..
Red, white and blue right, wrong the flag is covered in red,
Blood every where, Nothings being announced or being said,
Nice man.
overall a good drop, keep it up, sorry about your bro man..

ye i was feelin this i kno wut u feelin dawg i like the way u kept it goin and i like the vocab u uses ...hope u get som good feed kepp it on loc

g/l on this one

Thank You.
Rise!